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Reviews for Mad Snorkacks and Englishmen

By : SalonKitty
  • From JasonsLea on February 24, 2011
    Chapter 10:

    Oh Luna! :(

    I love how protective and tender Harry is, even when he's domming.
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  • From JasonsLea on February 24, 2011
    Holy crap, this is amazing! You have Harry and Luna's personalities down pat. Unfortunately, I could see Luna letting people do that to her in canon. My poor Luna. :( I'm loving Dom Harry!
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  • From ninesenshi on February 10, 2011
    Regarding dialog in chap 6. It was fine, if that is how these characters are. We did not see much of her father in the books so he could be like that. Luna is unusual enough that as she exists in this story, the dialog was fine. Nice masturbating at the end.
    SailorNemesis
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  • From ninesenshi on February 10, 2011
    Chapter 4. Nice going, I love the concept of dominance to save somebody. I hope things work out for these two, although I wonder when events will start to change from canon as Harry should be influenced by this relationship. Very well written.
    SailorNemesis
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  • From ninesenshi on February 09, 2011
    Just read chapter 2. Powerful stuff. Great use of metaphors, very intense.
    SailorNemesis
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  • From chiken8mafechan on October 04, 2010
    just wow! At last a story that makes Harry a Dom actually credible!! I
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  • From xtp10279 on June 28, 2010
    Absolutely adored Ginny getting caned. I'm resisting the urge to chant 'more, more, more'. Her pride and fierceness afterwards, particularly her Neville-assisted bad assery was a fantastic compliment to it. But yeah, I just adore the noble leader of the resistance baring her arse as the price for her bravery. Tasty.

    Luna's starting to concern me. She feels a little TOO submissive. The necklace was an odd, disturbing touch. Nice speech to Goyle though.
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  • From xtp10279 on June 27, 2010
    16:

    Alas - Ginny Weasley looks likes she may be being set up as villain only. I have to say that I thought the fight scene was well-written. Her anger seemed well-matched to her emotions and canon descriptions of her charcter. As we know from Krum-Gate, she can be cruel and vicious when she feels threatened. Poor girl. And poor Luna, too. What a horrible situation to be stuck in.
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  • From xtp10279 on June 27, 2010
    I am so hoping for Harry having his way with Ginny. That would be immense. I was also really glad that Harry had clearly arranged a non-verbal safeword. Nice to know he learns from his mistakes.

    Everything involving Remus was legendary.
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  • From xtp10279 on June 26, 2010
    Chapter 13:

    Wow. Definitely some of the hottest sex I've ever read. I repeat what I said about your maximising the emotional intensity to incredible levels. With a lot of written porn, there are pretty basic descriptions of sex acts: 'Then Voldemort pushed a plug into Ginny arse, and then he beat her with a tawse, etc.' and whatever level of arousal there is is created by the taboo nature of the acts. In your writing, the arousal comes from the emotions as they weave to astronomical levels in these exceptional, extended scenarios.

    Harry's thought to Remus was hysterical. The alpha-male thoughts that followed particularly apt and thought-provoking.

    Felt very sorry for Luna.
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  • From xtp10279 on June 20, 2010
    Wow. Just read chapter 8. Absolutely stunning. You really show Luna's mental state as she is absolutely lost in Harry's dominance and passion. I love the end scene. He's just so wonderfully demanding of her. Gorgeous writing.
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  • From Daye on June 01, 2010
    Salon Kitty's e-mail is on her profile, Paladin. Drop her a line and she'll add you to her updates mailing list.
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  • From paladinkriss on May 30, 2010
    Very nice story so far. Now to find out how to be alerted when the next chapter is uploaded
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  • From Scarybearhair on May 18, 2010
    Chapter 34

    Yay! I finally got to read this. As always, I thought it was fabulous!

    I think I told you before that you have me very intrigued about what Ginny has in mind for Draco. You write her very cocky and I get this big grin thinking up all the things she might come up with. We already know Draco wants her. Are you considering bringing them together? I would so squee if you did. LOL

    I also told you how I feel about Mr. Ollivander. I am a big John Hurt fan. I think he
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on May 08, 2010
    I'm glad you saved the best part for posting. The Ron/Hermione scene was so full of emotion and realistic, it really made me rethink them as a couple. I love the confession and how Ron pieced it together, I think he would, and I love that he was able to forgive and understand. I just really loved that whole section. But the entire chapter is fantastic. Harry's confession was much needed and I'm so glad he told them, but the revelation that he's been hurting himself was heartbreaking. I hope reuniting with Luna will help him. And Ginny and Neville make quite a team, you've got me looking at all of these characters in completely different ways because of your ability to combine strong canon characterization with a twist of your own. It's really amazing. I can't wait to see what's next. Brilliant as always.
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