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By : SalonKitty

From serenagold on May 06, 2010
Arf! Arf!

Everytime~!
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From Daye on May 05, 2010
Now that was a real quality chapter. Well worth the wait. Though the direction you're taking Ginny and Neville is unexpected. (Well Ginny mainly, but both of them smoking to take the edge off is interesting. Where do you get ciggies in the magical world anyway?)

The Ron and Hermione stuff was excellent, as well as the vague tension between all the parties, it's good that not all of it disappears like it did in canon for the most part after Ron came back. And the smut was good to. Very distinct from Harry's stuff.

I'm wondering how big a deviation from Canon, this overheard conversation will lead to? Will it just lead to them saying the name and getting captured on purpose? Or will they instead just be kicking down the door of Malfoy Manor? :D
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From Pete91888 on May 04, 2010
Awsome chapter. I was afraid that you had dissapeared. Anyway can't wait for the next installment. And Im glad Hermione finally got her affair off her chest now Harry needs the sam thing. Also you've been following the books so far. Are you going to have the trio assault Malfoy Manor or are they going to enter as written by JKI Rowling?
Pete
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From harrimbo on March 26, 2010
Great story. I read in record time up to this chapter. I can't believe that I'm totally intrigued with a BDSM story. That prooves, that it don't really matter WHAT you do (or write in that case), but HOW you do it. But sometimes you really scare the shit out of me. The last encounter of Harry and Luna was very hard for me to read. So glad when it ended without severe damage. Dom Harry clashing with Dom Hermione was great. Draco secretly fantasising about beeing sandwiched between Ginny and Harry was great fun.
Keep going.
Thanks for sharing that story with us!
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From Kasiniare on March 21, 2010
This story is incredible. Hell, it made me and my wife talk about starting a DOM/SUB relationship with one another. This story is very useful in getting in touch with my own inner desires, and it is written wonderfully. I'm a huge Harry/Luna and Harry/Hermione shipper, and I was immensely disappointed with Rowling's final book. You've made not only a better, more engaging story, but you've also made my dreams come true. Thank you.
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From Scarybearhair on March 09, 2010
Chapter 33

Oh no, now I
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From Scarybearhair on March 05, 2010
Chapter 32

Oooh, Rub
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From Scarybearhair on February 26, 2010
Chapter 31

Oooh now I see how Draco comes into this. I know you struggled with the next chapter. I
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From NutsAboutHarry on February 20, 2010
Spanky fingers to me for not reviewing for a while but I had to review this latest one....My minds eye picture of Harry, Ron and Hermione off their faces made me laugh out loud! It was HILARIOUS! Can't wait to see how the sory progresses. I hope you bring Dudley up again maybe if you write an epilogue?

Great stuff!
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From Scarybearhair on February 07, 2010
Chapter 30

OMG! You always write so deep. It
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From Scarybearhair on February 04, 2010
Chapter 29

You always write such awesome mindfuck, Salon! It
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From aFiZZiFa on February 04, 2010
This sensational... I have read one like this in a long, very long time. Keep it up. And stop torturing my favorite girl - Luna please...
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From SoftObsidian74 on January 31, 2010
Whoa! What a trippy chapter! I wasn't expecting NONE of that! Very interesting. I really enjoyed the Draco interlude and masturbation scene. Poor Draco. He really wants Ginny bad, huh? His fantasy with the three was really intriguing. I loved that he was OK picturing Harry and Luna together though. That was hot. It is interesting that he kept getting interrupted in doing the task he was assigned to do by his own dad. I wonder what that's all about. I hope going back to school will be a good thing but if you're keeping it canon, perhaps not. This is an interesting development though. The whole thing with concert and Dudders was crazy. But it was a much needed break for all of them. I'm glad Harry and Dudley are bonding and that Harry's reaffirming his bonds with both of his best friends. Can't wait to see where you take it from here. Way to keep it unpredictable and fun, Kitt!
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From Daye on January 30, 2010
Well after a few weeks of on and off reading I finally managed to completely read both this story and that of 'Boys & Girls' so I thought I really should sign up and review. All in all I think its a pretty amazing piece of work, though I can hardly try and type up all the thoughts I've had over thirty three chapters into one review.

Oddly and sad to say, I actually find the Harry/Luna BDSM stuff is the weakest part for me. Mainly, I think because I'm not into that stuff myself and don't really get it, I suppose. I prefer the BDSM stuff I read to be the lighter more game like stuff Hermione talks about in one chapter... This is a bit weird because I really would have preferred Harry/Luna (Huna/Larry?) over H/Ginny to be canon.

Anyway, what I really do like is the on going povs from characters other than Harry and all the additional scenes added to Deathly Hallows. I'm also a sucker for the WAFF stuff. I was slightly disappoint when Harry and Hermione got it on. It would have been nice to have Ron and Hermione's slowly relationship to be a nice counterpoint to Harry & Luna's mad rush in style.

So really digging the non-sex character stuff more than the sex. :)
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From serenagold on January 29, 2010
Of course I'm back!! Like I'd ever stray from a story like this. ;)

Hehehe.. loved the chapter!! Your version of Dudley is, like, my new favorite character. Also, I get such a total kick when you throw in all these culture references from '98. Its like re-living my senior year in the most awesome way possible. lol

Keep up the great work!
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