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Reviews for Mad Snorkacks and Englishmen

By : SalonKitty
  • From tommye on September 21, 2009
    Back again? lol.
    The opening to this chapter was very interesting. What is Draco going to do to Luna exactly?
    Now on to Ron and Hermione. When they kissed at the start of the chapter I really thought they were going to go the whole way. I was looking forward to Ron nailing Hermione into the tree lol.
    I love Hermione's assumptions about what is wrong with Harry, and Ron keeping Hermione in the dark about the locket destruction. I hope Harry cheers up a little and I wonder how he'll react when he finds out that Luna has been kidnapped. And I wonder how Ron will react when he finds out about what Harry and Hermione got up to in his absence.

    Keep up the good work,
    Update very soon please,
    tommy
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  • From majorwllr on September 20, 2009
    Just read Chapter 10 wow. Erotica should not be able to make people feel hurt but it does. You made this chapter hurt as much as the end to House Season 4. Amazing. Not great job but good writing I guess.
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  • From bsmith2114 on September 17, 2009
    Great story. Hermione, it seems would like this life style when she is truthful with herself and a little drunk. like she was in the last chapter I read. (i'm still a little behind where you are now) I think it would be a nice side story for a chapter. Ron may be a nice guy, but he is a follower, and he would follow Hermonie anywhere. Keep up the great writing.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on September 16, 2009
    You don
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  • From Scarybearhair on September 16, 2009
    Chapter 11

    This was a lovely chapter. Luna and Harry are becoming so much closer now. They are sharing their insecurities and talking about their childhood. If they don
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  • From Pete91888 on September 15, 2009
    Just out of curiosity are you going to kill Tonks and Remus per canon or are you going to have them survive in your story?
    Thanks
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  • From Pete91888 on September 13, 2009
    Awsome chapter. It was a long time coming though. Harry really seems like he's going tol kill someone or something though. Anyway great chapter and I lookforward to the next installment.
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  • From Scarybearhair on September 11, 2009
    Chapter 10

    I
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  • From Scarybearhair on September 08, 2009
    Chapter 9


    Petunia is such a bitch, but to be honest, I can
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  • From Scarybearhair on September 01, 2009
    Chapter 8

    This was a passionate chapter. I love how Harry and Luna are getting to know each other. Here they are talking in bed, learning about each other
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  • From Scarybearhair on August 30, 2009
    Chapter 7

    Whenever I hear She Came In Through the Bathroom Window, I always think of Mean Mr. Mustard and Polythene Pam.
    Yes Abby Road is my favorite Beatles album. LOL

    So Harry is been dreaming of Luna. And the way he whisks her up in his arms and pushes her against the tree is rather romantic.

    I had to laugh that Luna thought the Knight Bus was so much fun. It looks fun to me too. LOL
    I was also laughing that she was so amazed by the refrigerater. It
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  • From Scarybearhair on August 28, 2009
    Squee! One of my favorite songs.

    Give me a ticket for an airplane.
    I ain
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  • From Scarybearhair on August 27, 2009
    Chapter 5

    Woohoo, a lot is certainly going on in this chapter and it
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  • From Scarybearhair on August 26, 2009
    Chapter 4

    A lot happened in this chapter and it was a very exciting, but some of it was hard to read. I just cringe thinking about having to service, Goyle and Crabb
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  • From Scarybearhair on August 25, 2009
    Chapter 3

    I am so glad you showed more of Luna
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