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Reviews for Back for Good

By : LiteraryBeauty
  • From WitchatHeart77 on May 31, 2009
    I understand about not having many Hermione/Sirius fans on this site. I am always looking for more stories with this couple. I usually leave a good review at the end of the story but seeing as this is a WIP, I guess I need to tell you that I love it so far and am eagerly awaiting your next chapter. As for the sex scene, you captured the moment very well. I read a lot of fanfiction and I see the same words used over and over but you dove into a very well thought out vocabulary. I commend you. Excellent writing style and only the smallest of typos. I will be checking the story daily for updates!
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  • From Catiie on May 31, 2009
    I agree with you about the lack of fans/good stories.

    Keep writing them! We need more.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 30, 2009
    wow you write this pairing really well! you're right there is a shortage or sirius/hermione on this site, as well as many others unfortunatly, but you definatly do it justice.
    *gives many cookies*
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  • From ANON - Rachel on May 26, 2009
    I've been reading stories on this site for awhile and this is only my second review. For what it's worth, I am really enjoying this story. It's well-written, sexy without making me feel like a perv for reading it :) and you update before I've forgotten what I've already read. Thank you and I look forward to reading more.
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  • From celticdewin on May 26, 2009
    I am really enjoying ths story. i hope you continue it soon. If you aren't getting as many reviews as you would like on this site you just have to press on and hope for the best. I know how it feels, I'm there now. That is why I wanted to drop you a note saying good job and that I can't wait to read more. For some reason Sirius and Hermoinie is one of my favorite pairings and it is good that someone can wrte them in such a way that their relationship is believable. Again keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Sonia on May 25, 2009
    Really liked it, i was having a shitty day and then I saw that this story had an update! I was excited and happy agian! good ratings for this one, keep it up!
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  • From theomniscientjew on May 25, 2009
    yay for another chapter! I've been hooked from the beginning and have followed along the entire time. Do keep up the good work!
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  • From oliversangel on May 25, 2009
    Oh dear lord! I found this through your Lucius/Draco/Hermione story. Shame on people for not being fans of Sirius/Hermione! I adore the pairing, and I am always looking for a good story about them. But instead of finding a great story, I found an amazing one. I love everything about this story. The dark elements, the sex (of course ^.^) the sweet moments, and affection they have for each other, both Sirius and Hermione's doubts and insecurities...this is bloody fantastic. And I thank you for taking the time to write it and share it with us. I cannot wait to read more of it, and I also can't help but be glad that it is longer than the 10 chapters you anticipated. I hope it will be quite long actually. You have an wonderful style of writing, and I appreciate all the effort, thought, and detail you put into writing it. I hope the next chapter will be out soon..I feel quite addicted to this story, as Hermione and Sirius feel to each other. So please don't let me suffer the anxiety of seperation from it too long? ^.^

    XXOO
    Ero
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  • From NutsAboutHarry on May 25, 2009
    I'm a Hermione/Sirius fan!

    That was a luffly little chappie and I can't wait to see what happens when Hermione wakes up. And I hope there will be another time where they will make love not fuck just because they have to.

    Well done!
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  • From sleepygirl68 on May 24, 2009
    Good chapter.

    Thanks for writing and sharing your story with us.
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  • From leValkyrie on May 24, 2009
    I totally agree with you that there are not many Sirius/Hermione fans on this site, but I am here! I like what you have done with the story so far. It is clear that Hermione and Sirius won't have the typical morning after awkwardness, you know the whole ripping feeling and the screams kinda chucked that out the window, but it is going to be interesting to see how Hermione reacts in the morning. Great update and I will be looking out for the next one.
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  • From WitchatHeart77 on May 23, 2009
    Wonderful beginning! Excellently written. Just the right amount of suspense to turn the page. Looking forward to reading more.
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  • From sleepygirl68 on May 20, 2009
    Good chapter. I have eagerly been reading your story and look forward to reading more.

    Thanks for writing and sharing it with us.
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  • From tambrathegreat on May 19, 2009
    That last line cracked me up. We need to talk? I think they both need more action, much less talk. I also loved the line Snape said about getting on with the copulation. Too funny.

    Thanks for the great read.

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  • From leValkyrie on May 10, 2009
    I love what you have written so far about this story. Please update soon because I am looking forward to see what you do with this story.
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