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From margaritama on March 06, 2009
Lucius hasn't ridden her yet! LOL - sorry just kidding.

So this is interesting, now she's seeking him out. We know that Lucius wants her but the fact that she's going out of her way to find him is very interesting. I wonder why? I mean she must have hated him no? All that attraction couldn't just have happened from their first meeting, she must have been harboring a secret crush on him for a little while now. And she feels free to pursue now that she is anonymous. The mask is a way for her to feel free and wanton. Though I think removing the glove was a mistake. Lucius notices details and her little manicure was a detail.

You know if she wants him so much, just make him enter into a wizarding oath. That way she can have him all she wants cause I don't see how she's going to fuck him with that mask.

This encounter will no doubt push him back to the MoM - and to Hermione's office. I think we know who the Masked Lady is and I'm waiting for Lucius to make the connection - he's no fool. I think he's going to blackmail Hermione for sex sex sex in order to keep her secret. Hell, why not?

Thanks for updating.
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From MB3 on March 06, 2009
I am so excited to be reading another Lumione by you! I, like everyone else, automatically thought "Robin Hood", but when skimming your reviews found one that referenced Zorro, and I like that analogy better. Because if the masked lady really is Hermione, then she is more like Zorro than Robin Hood. While reading Chapter 5, I noticed that Lucius shouted "Jesus Christ." I didn't think that wizards really knew Jesus so was wondering if why he said that would be explained later, or if I should just assume that he's somewhat religious enough to shout "Jesus Christ?"

I wonder if Harry is going to figure out that Lucius has become obsessed with the masked lady and start to tail him to figure out why. That could potentially lead to her getting caught or barely getting away and could be interesting.

Can't wait to read the rest of the story!
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From HarryGinny4eva on March 06, 2009
I've never found the theater so much fun! I must be attending the wrong ones...hmmm Thank you for a lovely interlude in my day and I look forward for him to reciprocating. ;-) HG4eva
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From smmz79 on March 06, 2009
yeahhh another update... love love love it.... ok so now he is just trying to get robbed that is funny that he actually puts that much thought into what he is wearing bc he assumes that she will take whatever it is... nice belt buckle.... way to go hermione she is very firey i think that you have written the two sides of her very well she is the frumpy over worked and stressed out ministry employee that runs a dept that everyone in the ministry overlooks but still a very strong independent woman who knows who she is and can stand toe to toe with lucius when he inquires about the masked lady then there is her robin hood character where she is sexy sultry all the while trying to help those that the ministry ignores.... great job... i noticed in this chap that while she was thinking about lucius still investigating her that she did not mention her own name she said he went to harry not the auror office and that he went to the charity office not to see hermione obviously she is the masked lady... great job though and you are giving him hints i wonder if he would think of her of course he would not because he still sees her as the person she portrays at the office.... i like that he begged her to go home with him and that he would keep her secrets i think that he would hide her identity..... can not wait fo ryour next chap!!!!!
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From diamondhelen on March 06, 2009
Mmm lovely way to start a weekend! I was convinced the Masked Lady was Hermione, because it doesn't make much sense otherwise, but the manicured fingernails have thrown me off! All the other differences are very temporary but department of charities messy Hermione doesn't equate to manicured fingers so now im beginning to doubt, but it has to be Hermione! ah im all confused! very very sexy chapter though, can't wait for Lucius' paying her back!
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From HermioneMalfoFan on March 06, 2009
Oh yes! Let the lemons begin, I am all for it! Who could possibly blame you for smut? Ah, not ME that's for sure... Although I must admit that it is hard to wait a whole day for the updates. *pouts* Okay, okay, patience has never been one of my strong points, so don't listen to me.

I guess everybody suspects the Masked Lady to be Hermione (yeah right, me, too)... So the only question is: will Lucius be abel to make the connection? He's certainly not stupid - but the outward apparence of the two women is quite different.

Arghh... I'll have to wait to know. Like I said: patience? What is that?

Good to have you back on fanfiction. :-)
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From voraciousreader on March 06, 2009
Ah, nothing like mixing a little business with pleasure. A lot of it, actually. And the lure of the forbidden as well. What's another sin for her if she's already having to break rules of the wizard world? Besides, it's fun! Now, if she were serious, after having robbed them at the various events, she would head to a selected victim's house or two while they were busy with the Aurors and rob the house as well.
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From helenesnape on March 06, 2009
Chapter 5: AH...random acts of smuttiness to get us through to the next update. Thanks!

It's so difficult to wrap my mind around the differences between 'everyday Hermione' and 'Masked Lady Hermione.' Not that I'm not loving every second of this naughty little tale you have so carefully spun...but it's almost like she has some sort of split personality disorder (that is if the Masked Lady is indeed Hermione, but who else could she be) The fact that she can disassociate herself from the darker side (robbing people, no matter the justification seems dark to me). I know she's doing it to cover her tracks, not wanting to give herself away. But I just can't imagine how 'do-gooder Hermione' rationalizes 'bad-girl' Hermione.

Oh, BTW congrats on getting your book details all worked out. I know all about that copyright business being a MAJOR pain in the butt. My grandmother was a songwriter/poet and she constantly complained about the forest's worth of paper she went through just to get one of her works published. Best of luck to you and I can't wait to hear more about your new work.

Please update when you can,
MHS
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From ANON - Sheep on March 06, 2009
Loved it.
I always check your author page (the only one i ever check) and i was so excited to see the first 4 chapters up, and then this new one =)
What is your book called,or would that be too personal? I'm quite interested to know what kind of book you would write after reading your fantastic fanfic. PLease keep it up even when you become a famous author, =)
Sheep
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From KellyJCR on March 06, 2009
Let me just say that was unbelievably HOT! The thought of Lucius going commando...even hotter. Now that is out off the way I am almost positive that the "theif" is Hermione. First, she says she knows him and second,she doesn't trust him. So she must know him well and for quite some time. Is this Hermiones way off making him and the other pureblood/rich/deatheaters attone for "crimes during the war. Or is she attracted to him and this is one way to get his attention and get her job done. Lucius I'm surprised is going along with this very willingly. He is baiting her every time he goes out and it makes me wonder if he wants her because she is a criminal. I say that becasue it seems he wants someone naughtier and stronger than Narcissa. On the other hand is he just so unbelievably lonely he jumps at the first women to show him the exact attention he seems to crave. If this is not Hermione I'm going to eat my hat. I can't think of who it could possibly be. I'm still not sure how she is getting around with using magic yet not getting caught. Can't wait for more although the waiting does give time to ponder the possibilities. Well done!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - VertPin on March 06, 2009
It's maybe the first time I review a story on this site... which one, I am on for months.

Very great scene that the Opera one!

Go on :)
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From ANON - amy skydancer on March 06, 2009
oh this is a riot!!! i laughed soooo hard when Draco complained of being slapped LOL.......
waits c-c-c-calmly....for the next update......whimper.....plead.....puppydog eyes.....chocolate!!!!
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From ANON - doodle on March 05, 2009
I like what I assume are the dual roles for Hermione. It could lead to all kinds of adventures.
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From doyoueverwonder on March 05, 2009
*flails with excitement*
you are back yay!!!!!! I have been in Snapes_Goddess depravation and you are back with a vengeance woman!!!!!! Fierce as always. Steamy and I love it. I have this nagging feeling that a certain curly haired witch might be this masked lady hmm hmmm. *squeee* so excited can't wait to see what else you have up your sleeve this time!!
*flails some more*
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From gtbioteach on March 05, 2009
Oh, hello!
I would give almost anything to see the look on his face during the carriage scene.
Pondering - does she want him like he wants her? What brought that on?
And, did she slap Draco just because he's Draco?

Loving this story. So very, very creative and funny. The thought of Lucious Lucius all twittered over an unknown woman is just rich.
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