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Reviews for Sea Change

By : Jilliane
  • From ANON - SickPuppy on August 08, 2009
    Chapter Three - Oh I do enjoy reading your Snape, he is so full of perfect sarcasm! I quote:

    I gave over 15 years of my life to trying, futilely I might add, to instill knowledge into the tiny minds and empty heads of future generations of wizarding spawn, only to be frustrated at every turn by their complete inability to comprehend even the most basic of instructions! I have been doused in more vile concoctions, stained and scourged by the most foul of brews, and nearly blown up more times than I care to remember, and I will not subject myself to that brand of hell again!

    Oh god, so perfect!

    And the last bit, with the note from Severus? 'I hate you', lovely! Expresses perfectly Snape's annoyance at giving in (yet again) to Albus' manipulations.

    Wonderful!

    Of course, now I want to know why Harry is quitting as an Auror, and when poor Severus is going to confess all!

    SP
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  • From ANON - etheriaelle on August 08, 2009
    "And just exactly how do you propose I do that, Albus?" Severus sneered. "Perhaps I should invite him to tea and Sunday dinner at Spinner's End, where we can reminisce fondly over my abominable treatment of him when he was my student, and whilst we are having a good laugh over that, I'll just nonchalantly drop my little bombshell. Oh yes, I can see it now. "By the way, Harry, not only was I an utter bastard to you, I thought you should know, I'm your father." Do you think he'll welcome me with open arms, Albus? Hmm?" *dies* Severus Snape at his snarky, sarcastic best. I'm itching to know what has happened that Harry wants to give up being an Auror and come to Hogwarts to teach. Gehenna? ~lol~ Hogwarts has it's own special level of hell for Severus. Not just Hell or Hades, had to be Gehenna for him of course. Love the owl message! So Severus! Poor Minerva! Her iron backbone seems to need a bit of scotching up now that she is faced with so many Potters and numerous problems to handle on her own now. I'm sure that James or Harry would either be enough on their own but now she has a duplicate of each on board and Lily's on deck. Shesh. Hope that having Harry back helps now that he is an adult and hopefully grown out of flaunting the rules. LOVE this story. Write faster!

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  • From ANON - tf on August 07, 2009
    Severus's note was funny, but I do hope he's able to become part of Harry and the children's lives... where's Lucius?- thanks for sharing!
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  • From winspearcj on June 26, 2009
    please telll me you're going to wriite more cuz no one saw that coming it was awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From cravedom on May 05, 2009
    Do you think he is going to set his robes on fire? I went back to read the first chapter to make sure I did not forget anything and indeed I had. I had forgotten about the whole Potter and Draco being realated. I am eager to find out the details specially when the story is Lucius/Severus. There are some juicy secrets in this story. I wonder what Harry and Draco will have to say about it. The thought is almost funny.

    Like always your stories make my day.
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  • From ANON - Light on May 05, 2009
    I have to admit to a little confusion - the closest relation Scorpius/Albus could possibly be is first cousins, and as the story is set in England (although frowned upon) the relationship is perfectly legal. Anyway you have a very unique premise and it's an interesting beginning, I look forward to seeing where this goes and what you do with it x x x
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  • From ANON - SickPuppy on May 04, 2009
    Chapter Two - Dun dun duuuunnnn! It sounds as though Severus is all set to give Albus a piece of his mind, something I always enjoy.

    Lovely chapter, as always, m'dear! Please keep up the good work, (and huge thanks to Tambra for getting you going again!)

    SP
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  • From tambrathegreat on May 04, 2009
    I loved the chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope you've broken through your block now.

    REVIEWS always help.

    I know your Severus is going to light into Dumbles something fierce, I hope he gives him what for. I bet now he regrets having killed him before. Maybe he can make Dumbles and Inferi and kill him again. Manipulative Dumbledore is always the best foil for Good Snape.

    Thanks for the new chappie. Write more soon.

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  • From ANON - GillyChan on April 12, 2009
    Update soon please ;D I'm liking this one so far!
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  • From cravedom on March 06, 2009
    OMG, how could he keep this secret for so long! I bet Severus is glad he killed the old fool. I could even sort of understand him not telling before Harry's sacrifice; why not after? Severus missed his son's childhood and his grandchildren too! Arrrg!

    That still does not tell me how Albus and Scorpius are related... You do have an mpreg warning
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  • From tambrathegreat on March 05, 2009
    Dun dun dun dun. is right. How can you leave us hanging like that? Your faithful readers need to know the rest of the story. Shoot.

    Albus Dumbledore is quickly becoming my least favorite character. You've written his character well.

    Write me and post soon.

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  • From ANON - Sick Puppy on March 05, 2009
    Chapter One - The hell? How on earth is Severus Harry's father?! Did he and Lily get it on? And... *thinks* how could Al and Scorp be realted unless ...did Snape do Narcissa? Or, ew.. Bellatrix?!

    I am eager to find out more! And eager for Luc to come in and save Sev from some scheming woman!

    More please!

    SP (Nope, still not signed in!)
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  • From tambrathegreat on March 04, 2009
    Already loving the set up. I can't wait to read more. I hope you get the story up soon. HINT. I wonder why James is so prejudiced about Slytherins. Even in cannon, he was just a little jerk to Albus when his little brother worried about being put in Slytherin. Perhaps Harry can set James straight about Slytherins since he's going to be teaching DADA. I hope.

    Great first chappie. Can't wait for more.

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  • From ANON - Sick Puppy on March 04, 2009
    Hang on... Did I read that right? Al is in SLYTHERIN and Scorp is in GRYFFINDOR? It certainly looked that way!

    And, I'm really interested in what's going to happen. Like it says, Al and Scorp seem close. Is Harry really going to be that happy about his son being so "friendly" with a Malfoy?

    And, what is Albus (Dumbledore) up to?

    Good stuff, mucho intriguing!

    SP (Sorry, I'm not signed in).
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