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Reviews for Betrayed

By : Akashavampyr
  • From Kayrox133 on May 16, 2010
    Eek! I would love to read the rest of this but I feel your pain with writer's block. It sucks doesn't it?
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  • From ANON - mjd on January 24, 2010
    Wow very powerful chapters, I kind of wish now I had waited to read this as I want to read the next chapter already. I do have to ask that in chapter two you said it was months and years later that Harry was found innocent. How old was Harry at the time of death? I am curious on how old everyone would be at the time of the haunting. I am sure that either Ron or Hermione are next.
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  • From Darkmanu on March 16, 2009
    not a bad story wud be nice if chapters were longer or if to stay this length then to put out a few at a time
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