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Reviews for Just a lapsus

By : Akashavampyr
  • From ANON - Asherah4u on September 06, 2009
    I loved the new chapter. Also I think it would be cool to have the next one is Draco's pov. It would let us know what was going through his mind. lol Anyway really love the story. Update soon! :)
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  • From ANON - Michelle on August 15, 2009
    I think for the next chapter you should get some of Draco's perspective in there. Let us know what that boy's thinking. :)
    Loved this, and your first take at slash is good :)
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  • From Juana13 on August 08, 2009
    interesting... can't wait to read more. will this 'lapsus' grow into something more??
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  • From thrnbrooke on August 07, 2009
    Oh Harry! Tooo cute! Can't wait for chapter 3!!!
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on August 07, 2009
    lol. now that is great! please do continue. i'd kinda like to know what draco is thinking and if he's having as much of a "problem" as harry. *snickers*
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  • From Juana13 on May 10, 2009
    ooooh, very nice...
    love to see how this would continue.
    but if you want it just to be a oneshot, that's ok.
    wish there was more though...
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  • From isipare1988 on April 20, 2009
    loved it !
    that is one of the most erotic and full of tension bout i read, ever !
    thanks and hope to see more of your works
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  • From trickstermessiah on March 16, 2009
    ... More please!
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  • From lissagal99 on March 09, 2009
    Did you mean "lapse" instead of "lapsus?"
    Because "lapsus" isn't a word... but I wasn't sure if you were making it one.
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  • From delfina87 on March 08, 2009
    brillant, i wonder how many lapsus Draco's going to have?
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  • From FallenAngel1129 on March 07, 2009
    oohh i liked it very much....update please?
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  • From christis on March 06, 2009
    this is a good start :-) hope you plan to write more stories
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  • From TwinOfDoom on March 06, 2009
    I like your writing style and the fact that you don't use their names kind of makes them turn into completely different persons during their encounter. I like that. Good first try at writing slash, as well. :)
    I couldn't help feeling reminded of Anne Rice's Lestat and Nicky ... *goes into a dreamy state*
    Anyways. I really like your story. Keep it coming. And don't worry about your English ... at least that's my opinion (also a non-native speaker, but still ... ^^) *Thumbs up*
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  • From thrnbrooke on March 06, 2009
    Wonder if he shows up?
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