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Reviews for Of a trunk and the nice bum sitting on top of it

By : ivebeenchris
  • From RebornFlames on April 01, 2009
    Hi, I just read your story and thought it was great. The amusing title caught my eye and brought me to read it and I liked how Ginny seemed completely at ease with the situation as Hermione tried to work out how to react to her advances. Coming on that strong is a bit of a risk but it paid off well for them both.

    As for minor mistakes, the only one that stood out for me was this:
    "Unless of course your bum is using your wand behind your back. Literary."
    That probably wants to say 'Literally' at the end instead of 'Literary'. I'm from England I reckon you probably write better english than a lot of people I know here.

    It was a fun little plot with well described scenes and a very nice ending with the accidentally brushed hands. I'd love to see you write some more Hermione/Ginny stuff in the future :)

    -Reborn
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