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Reviews for Last Exit to Eden

By : lucretziathevagabond
  • From jkw625 on December 01, 2021

    I can hardly believe that I missed this story when it was first written. Perfection. Your attention to all the characters, not just Hermione and Lucius, is splendid. Kept me on the proverbial edge of my seat. I must admit that when I first read about the frog chasing , well it was a dead give-away that Umbridge was heavily involved. Loved that she of all people would ever after b e terrorized by the very sight of a stray cat. Thank you so much for wrapping it all up HEA.


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  • From OMGTarpan on January 19, 2011
    only marriage law fic on AFF that is believable, great story
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  • From purefaith91 on December 30, 2010
    Is the kitty after that toad because it is an animagus? That is not really the kind of thing you think of as a toy or offering for a cat. I am also wondering why Umbridge just dropped out of sight after threatening Hermione when she was fired. Very interesting... p
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  • From purefaith91 on December 30, 2010
    Hermione is acting like a ten year old. For her to stay there and make the excuses she was making is just ridiculous. Also her "I can take care of myself" attitude is getting old. She has the right idea not wanting to have decisions taken out of her hands without any discussion...it is wrong, but she could fix that by calmly telling him that. And her thinking that he is using her? She is supposed to be smart. He would have married her if she had not told him to back off. Could you tell she is just aggravating me as for someone who is supposed to "know-it-all", she knows very little. Maybe Lucius is really going to guard her for the next couple of days and does not want her to know? Shame that it would be necessary to hide taking that step to provide safety for her. I'm voting for Ron or Shacklebolt's wife to be the stalker (or maybe Shacklebolt himself is mad enough about her denying his edict and usurping his power to do it). p
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  • From purefaith91 on December 30, 2010
    This is too good! Since beginning to read fanfic stories regarding a marriage law, I have wondered why Hermione did not tell them to take it and stick it. Although in many her parents are dead and she would have no one. It will be interesting to see if Harry visits her in the muggle world. Looking forward to seeing where you go with this story. p
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  • From magialuna on November 12, 2010
    Very good story with a satisfying ending, as well as an intriguing mystery. Great job.

    Clare
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  • From purpleann on July 25, 2010
    I've been on a little Lucius/Hermione kick lately, and I especially enjoy marriage law fics. I just had to write to tell you that yours is my most favorite. I love the involved plot you've concocted, and your new characters feel real and three-dimensional. Also, I love that you had Hermione reject the law and give up her wand; I don't think I've read any marriage law fics that do that! My only complaint is that you had most of the Weasleys abandon her completely. I understand, plot-wise, the need for her to feel isolated from her old friends, but that's the only part of the story that felt unlikely and out-of-character to me. Your redeemed Slytherins seemed very believable, as did your Kingsley, still a good guy but perhaps over his head in politics (which happens every day, let's face it). Your Weasleys were the only undeveloped/one-dimensional villains, which disappointed me. But otherwise a delightful story, thank you!
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  • From TammaraG on October 28, 2009
    This ws a great story. will you stop it here or write an epilogue?
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  • From ebonyeyez1 on September 06, 2009
    It was a very well written mystery tale. Not enough smut for this pup to warrant the NC-17 rating you gave it, but overall the story was wonderful.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 21, 2009
    A dear friend told me to check out this story and I was definitely not disappointed. Your story, the work and research you obviously did to back it up, the romance, the marriage laws, the mystery of the children and the bloody lines that led me back to Umbridge (How I abhor that woman) the charcterisations you kept the characters in and yet still allowed them to soften and evolve - everything you did to bring this story to life was nothing less than perfect. I applaud you, my dear, for your efforts, your writing style and your mind itself for conjuring up such a wonderful tale. Well done you!! I do hope you've written more stories for me to read. :)
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  • From on July 19, 2009
    one of the most amazing stories i have ever read...brilliantly woven and equally brilliantly written
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  • From FemmeBono on July 12, 2009
    Gah! I didn't even make the connection about Buttercream's toad *smacks forehead*. That was great though. Very in character for both of them, even in bringing them together. That was totally believable and kept me guessing; everything I could ask for.
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  • From dracois4ever on April 11, 2009
    I came upon this story purely by happenstance, it was listed as a favorite story by another author, they raved about it, so I decided to check it out. Wow, they were so right! This is one of the most amazing plots that I have read. You have completed a wonderful piece of literature and I would even venture a guess that if you reworked characters, setting up independent backgrounds and the like, it could become an actual novel. Well done! Keep up the writing, you clearly have a gift.
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  • From alina290 on April 07, 2009
    My overall review of your story. I had read the first chapter back in the beginnig of March. At first I thought it was going to be sort of childish. I did not think it was going to have so much mystery and angst. You have done such a wonderful job. I look forward to reading more of your stories. Umbridge is such an evil woman. I am so happy the kitten bit her leg. Serves her right.
    Liz
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  • From MistressV on March 24, 2009
    You know those moments when you're reading a really good book or something that has a lot of twisty plot, and you figure something out from a little action or discription that seems insignificant?

    WELL I FIGURED IT OUT! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!

    I think. I just had put it out there. I plan on reviewing more extensively after I finish the entire story.

    And to think I liked that toad and thought of Trevor when you mentioned it the first time. -.-

    Cheers!
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