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Reviews for Last Exit to Eden

By : lucretziathevagabond
  • From kazfeist on March 22, 2009
    Really neat story! I especially liked the pseudo-science, not the least because my husband is an OB/Gyn, and the issue of healthy childbirth is a topic of much conversation in our home. The fight scene at the last, overlaid with Hermione's reminiscences was a great image. My favority Malfoy pairing with Hermione is that of Draco, as I think their ages are better, but this was a great second pairing. :D
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  • From Tenar10r on March 18, 2009
    Very enjoyable story with good attention to detail. I eagerly awaited each chapter. :)
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  • From Lyndie578 on March 18, 2009
    An excellent and engaging HG/LM story. Thank you for sharing this with us. You wove a wonderful adventure! Cheers!
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  • From Lyndie578 on March 18, 2009
    This is such a fun and engaging story. Lots of angst and an lots of love, trying for it anyway. I'm racing through the chapters, but had to stop and tell you how much I'm enjoying this. Cheers!
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  • From winter748 on March 17, 2009
    Wow, this was a really good story with a great idea to explain the low birth rates in the Death Eater pureblood families. I thought it was well written with believable dialog. Hermione was a little weepy but hey she's a bit entitled as she's had a rough 3 years. It couldn't be easy or really healthy to not being doing magic all that time. We know she can get along doing things the muggle way but she's a powerful witch and not using her magic much had to be a strain on her physically. Not to mention being isolated from her friends.
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  • From tambrathegreat on March 16, 2009
    Okay, I have to admit that I usually review every chapter, but I soooo wanted to know the who, what, when and where of your story, that I neglected to. Thanks for such a fun read.


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  • From Sampdoria on March 16, 2009
    I was so exited when I found this story completed when I looked into this archive after a few days abcense, and you have done such a marvellous job!!!
    I have read almost the whole day, your plot and writing kept me reading just a bit more and a bit more.... The plot around the children and the Thalium was true brilliance, I am so impressed by your work. Again, a wonderful story!!!!
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  • From twinsie on March 14, 2009
    I absolutely loved this story! Did I read it right? This was your first fic? Oh wait ... your first completed fic. Meh ... potato ... poh-tah-toe. It was awesome nonetheless.

    I just noticed that you posted 2 new stories under Lucius and Hermione so I'm off to go read those next.

    I just wanted to say great job on this one. I just wished that you had Hermione beat up Umbridge or something. Life in Azkaban just doesn't scream fair to me. *sigh* Oh well ... maybe in one of your future fics (hint hint wink wink) ... ha ha ... yeah, I'm evil! *grins*
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  • From MariaTeresaQuintanar on March 14, 2009
    Great story! It was an original plot that was well told! Excellent work and I can't wait to read more of your writing in the future!
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  • From katiekrm on March 14, 2009
    I rarely review on AFF, but I had to tell you how happy I am that for the first time I am reading a marriage law fic where Hermione rebels!!! I have read some good ones, but I am always a little miffed that Hermione doesn't stand up to the ministry and gives into them taking her freedom away. Thank you so much!!! I am thrilled that she is giving them hell.
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  • From Madietta on March 14, 2009
    Such a good story, I have really enjoyed it. I love when people write fanfic in a certain genre, and mysteries are my big favorite. The plot was original and well thought-out. My only complaint would be that the actual relationship between Hermione and Lucius seemed kind of... underdone, maybe? It would have been nice if you had fleshed it out a little, given us more of them together. They spent more time angry at each other than anything else ;-)
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  • From Pumkin on March 14, 2009
    congrats on your first completed story. i quiet enjoyed it. i hope you write more stories to enjoy. good luck.
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  • From diamondhelen on March 13, 2009
    This is shaping up nicely its really interesting so far. But please please try to change whatever aff is doing to your punctuation marks, its really hard to read as it is!
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  • From trixiedust on March 13, 2009
    I'm liking your first chapter, and am interested to see what is going on.
    Will the orphanage be where she does her potions?
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  • From margaritama on March 12, 2009
    Yah - you brought this story to AFF.net...I never got to finish it.
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