Reviews for Breaking the ChainBy : RynStar15 |
The emotions I felt reading this! God this was so good. Definitely my favorite story thus far. I just wish there was more. This was an excellent read❤❤
I read this all at once. I loved it until Ithought you had killed of Draco, then I was very upset. Altenate choice/universe thing fixed it nicely. A very good read indeed thank you
??? Why did you post chapter 35 twice? Great chapter and enjoyed rereading it but was just wondering.
Chapter 23- So many times I had to put my tablet down and walk away because the welling of tears threatened to ruin my composure at work. It took a long while to get through that chapter. My dear, you have such a way with words. Your stories are incredible, and i am so glad to have found you here. Thank you for the escapes, the tears, the joys, the feels!!!! You are definitely in my top 5 authors.
Gee, have a broken phone for a few days and come back to this! Will be interesting to see how the two separate time lines will be resolved.
Yay!! Together again! That was so beautiful! I love how you wrote that rescue! I can't wait for more :)
This is one of the best, most creative dramione stories I have ever read! I fell in love right along with them, stressed during the battles, my heart broke and I cried as she fell to pieces at the funeral. You writing is truly magic in itself- I felt like I was right there, witnessing it all. I'm eagerly looking foward to your next chapter, hoping that Draco and Hermione get that much deserved happy future that cruelly passed them by the first time. Thank you so much for this!
Yay, I'm so excited for the ending to come
Loving it, but (SPOILER)
I really hope Draco is not really dead. Obviously you have to bring him back to the fight. What fun. I love warrior Hermione. Especially with wandless vengeful magic
You are just downright mean! Another evil cliffhanger? And here I am taking care of two sick grandkids, already being worked to bits with no joy in sight for the near future. 😢
Nooo, how can you leave it with this cliff hanger, can't wait for the next part of this story,
You are killing me Smalls! These cliffhangers are just too ooh torturous to take. And the tension just mounts. Another very good chapter.
That's just downright sadistic. Another cliffhanger? Evil doesn't even come close. Loved the chapter, especially the fact that Ginny knows.
Gee, spend a few days at my daughter's house taking care of sick kids and all hell breaks loose. Will these two poor kids ever be able to have a happily ever after together? One can only hope. Love it so far.
One word for you. Evil! Thanks for the frequent updates. 😊
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