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Reviews for Breaking the Chain

By : RynStar15
  • From apolla92 on April 18, 2009
    that was awesome! you have me at the edge of my sit i want more! update soon!
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  • From Citten on April 18, 2009
    .....weekend? weekend!?! WEEKEND!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU HAVE GOT TO BE JOKING!!!!!!! that is beyond mean! well you have lot--and i do mean lots--to cover in the next chapter! first i do love the chapter! :) i love the part with hermione had with her friends and i really love what they talked about and the emotions that you protraited. i love that you showed what was happening to them on the night before. but i still dont like that you have left us hanging! well two questions (which you better answer in the next chapter) are..... one: doesnt she know any spell or charm that would let them know 'if' she was pregant? and two: i really do hope that (even though he HAD to give her the potion) they talk about thier feelings, right? do post SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
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  • From revampedfallenangel on April 18, 2009
    aww now i'm all sad...don't worry i'm not going to throw veggies at you anyway
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  • From on April 18, 2009
    You evil evil little witch!!! I'm throwing down the rotten tomatos and going for the BB gun!!!!! GIVE ME MORE NOW!!!!!!
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  • From javolk on April 18, 2009
    OMG! OMG! OMG! You are very evil for ending the chapter there!!! Now I won't be able to concentrate on finishing my final presentation this weekend because I will be thinking about this story!!! *And it's due Monday at 8AM* That means that you NEED to update tomorrow to put my mind somewhat at ease!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!! I will be forever in your debt!!!
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  • From dragongirl on April 18, 2009
    Girl you make me tear eye and everything and you left me hanging here... OUTCH that was mean..... but hey it would be all better if you update soon..... :)
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  • From distinctlyME on April 18, 2009
    I was sobbing through the goodbyes. I'm usually not at all affected. I mean I laugh or smile or sigh, but crying through a story I'm readin has only ever really happened once, and that was because I had emotional female issues at that time!! haha

    But this...I was sobbing. I had to stop and blow my nose and clear my eyes and start all over again just to end up in tears once more seconds later.A true mark of a remarkable author is to pull forth such emotions from their readers.

    I am so blown away by this chapter. I mean this was a good story before, and now to me you've made this a great story. Truly truly incredible.

    Thank you for sharing your talents.

    Until next chapter.
    xo
    dM
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 18, 2009
    Thank you for the warning - I needed it. :) Love your descriptions. I felt I was there waiting to see the Dark Lord and was terrified for Draco (and myself) when Voldemort turned from pleased to incredible wrath in less than a heart beat. And the self flaggellations of guilt that Draco then imposed upon himself (that's when I felt the tears coming). But the best (worst for the tears) bit was when Draco finally let loose and confessed his love for Hermione and exploded in an emotional bomb that damn near too out the Professor too. And when he was finally spent and had nothing left but tears and let them fall all over Snape's robes - OMG I totally lost it. You showed us the anguish and pain of not only Draco but Snape as well. Bravo, my dear, bravo!!!!!
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  • From Citten on April 17, 2009
    LOVED THE CHAPTER!!!!! i am so looking forward to their night together! :) good old severus! well something wonderful has to happen to have things work out in the end! i just wish that (like draco) she did not have to forget what happens and i really would love to know who she left letters for! :) i hope all is well in life and you will be able to post a new chapter and soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 :)
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  • From SilverEyedPhoenix on April 16, 2009
    Im anxious to know what happens next eeek!! Great chapter updates soon!
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  • From apolla92 on April 16, 2009
    OMG! that was awesome, i can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From javolk on April 16, 2009
    *GASP* This is a Dramione story so I know that she lives, but still the suspense is killing me! Can't wait till the next chapter!
    P.S. sorry for not reviewing for a while! finals are in 2 weeks and I need to study!
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  • From margaritama on April 16, 2009
    I'm *sniff* so *sniff* heartbroken *sob*

    Poor Draco....*outright bawling* and Hermione!
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  • From dragongirl on April 16, 2009
    I have to be honest this chapter is heart felt for me I imagine both suffering and pull apart between duty and heart. Hey is not easy... Brilliantly written.. Keep them coming will be watching.
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  • From Shpamm123 on April 16, 2009
    Arghh Cliffhangers! get the next bit up!! :) x
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