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Reviews for Breaking the Chain

By : RynStar15
  • From wingslikeeagles on April 14, 2009
    Fabulous story, I can not wait for the next chapter!
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  • From redneckpassion on April 12, 2009
    I love your story so much, can't wait for the next update, even though I have a bad feeling about near death to one half of my favorite AU HP Ship. :(
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 12, 2009
    Wow! I'm almost too stunned to write anything. Only almost. LOL Double here since I missed a chapter but OMG both of them were just so sad and so unexpected. I did not expect anything this drastic even though the hint was always there. I always imagined Snape to be Draco's mentor and you could see how upset he was that Snape seemed disappointed in him. And oh that letter from his mother. Where was your 'needs tissues' warning? Goshdarnit!!!!!! LOL That was so beautiful and I could easily picture her saying exactly that to him.

    And then Hermione, poor Hermione. She seems to be paying for far too many mistakes, none of which were really her own devising. Now she feels guilty that Ron likes her and she doesn't feel the same. And she thinks Draco has betrayed her even though we know he bloody well hasn't. And she's got to dig into that Gryffindor bravery and courage and face this latest task with Snape making it very clear what ehefeels about her involvement in all of this too. Wow, that was so emotional. Well done!! :)
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  • From apolla92 on April 11, 2009
    awesome chapter! can't wait for more!
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  • From HighViscosity on April 11, 2009
    Very good! Martyrdom can be very annoying (like in Twilight), but this is a realistic way for her agree to sacrifice herself. Looking forward to more Draco!
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  • From mag7ical on April 11, 2009
    ooh I can't wait to see Draco's reaction to Hermione being a bait. Hopefully that knocks him into his senses.
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  • From dragongirl on April 10, 2009
    Is Snape moron or what she is pregnant for heaven's sake... AGGHHHHHHHH! Sorry to much into it!! Please let her know that Draco did it for a reason... that he loves her and let Draco know that Hermione is pregnant.. Keep them coming...
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  • From Tenar10r on April 10, 2009
    Great Story!
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  • From HighViscosity on April 10, 2009
    Thanks for the update!
    I'm curious as to why Snape isn't telling Hermione the truth, but I'm sure it's for his own wily reasons! Yay, Snape.
    I really liked the part with her remembering being with Draco, because awwww.

    Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From distinctlyME on April 10, 2009
    Ohhhh what a cliffy!!
    So exciting...so sorry this is a short review...I'm on the run! But I love this story and I sincerely think you've got talent.

    Can't wait for more.


    xo
    dM
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  • From apolla92 on April 10, 2009
    eek! what a great chapter i can't wait for the next post! i loved you depiction of Ron in that situation i could totally imagine that! Update ASAP!
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  • From AlmondGreenEyes on April 10, 2009
    I am loving this story! It's such a unique plot, and the characters aren't even OOC! I can't wait for the next chapters!
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  • From Citten on April 07, 2009
    'k loved that chapter!! poor draco now he is worried but maybe he found a way to work things to his advantage this will be interesting. i am so looking forward to more!!! so harry and hermione find a comfort with each other in a non-sexual way, truely like family. well now what will severus be doing to help draco and will he tell the order? oh so much to know--please update and soon!!!!! :)
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  • From SilverEyedPhoenix on April 07, 2009
    pregnant? hmmmmmmm interesting...

    update soon

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  • From HighViscosity on April 06, 2009
    Yay, Snape!
    Thank you for updating. A lovely story. I must confess that I hope she's not pregnant, but I'm sure I'll enjoy the next update either way.
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