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Reviews for Breaking the Chain

By : RynStar15
  • From ANON - Anon on April 06, 2009
    Awww that was just so sad. I mean I was laughing my arse off at the thought of Draco trying to work out when was the 'right' time for a witch to fall pregnant and how he thought that would stop her going into battle but the rest of it - the conversation with Snape, the other thoughts running around his head and the news of the horcruxes as he finally realised what he ahd done - oh that brought a tear to my eye. And then when I read Hermione's part about how she crawled into bed with Harry for a bit of the comfort they shared that was a secret just between them - sniff! Beautiful!!
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  • From apolla92 on April 06, 2009
    OMG i love it! that was a freaking awesome chapter! can't wait for the next!
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  • From javolk on April 06, 2009
    Poor Draco! I hope nobody gets the wrong idea about Harry and Hermione!

    Great chapter! Please update soon!!!
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  • From dragongirl on April 06, 2009
    Love it Love it Love it Now we only need some butt kicking especially Lucius and Voldy... Draco is so cute.. .LOL
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  • From SilverEyedPhoenix on April 03, 2009
    eeeeek ^_^ update soooonnnn!!! like maybe as soon as you read this lol
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  • From chickaboo on April 03, 2009
    Oh my gosh. Poor Draco! I'm not getting why he cares what happens to father. His mother I think I can understand as we haven't seen any real interaction between them but if it were me I'd just say screw it and hope that Voldemort punished Lucius. Anyway, really fantastic update, I can't wait for more!
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  • From apolla92 on April 03, 2009
    woo! that was awesome! can't wait for the next post! :]
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  • From kazfeist on April 03, 2009
    Very good transition chapter. Nice cliffhanger at the end. Hopefully Draco's Occlumency skills were up to the task to which he set them. :D
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  • From dragongirl on April 03, 2009
    We need a breakthrough please, something I plea, they need to found each other ... they need to and he needs to turn to the Order, rescue Narcissa and kick some butts... LOL I know too much into it... LOL Keep them coming please
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 03, 2009
    Well they were certainly welcomed back very differently. I half expected them to turn up somewhere else in time. :) Poor Draco, I did so want to hug him and make it all better. LOL And as for Hermione, I didn't know whether to tell Ron to back off or to hug him too. I guess he has more emotional depth than a teaspoon after all. LOL I think I would have bathed for as long as she did too. Of course there are some things you just can't wash away.

    And yes, you do indeed have a busy life out there in the real world, so don't stress, we know you'll update when you can. :)
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  • From Tenar10r on April 03, 2009
    Fluer should be spelled "Fleur"
    I am loving this story! You have a gift for action scenes and I like the way you mix cannon and non-cannon themes!
    I can hardly wait for the next chapter.
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  • From apolla92 on April 02, 2009
    that was great and i agree short! update soon! i love where it's going. :)
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  • From kazfeist on April 02, 2009
    Well, they're back in the present. I'm not sure how much longer this story will be, unless Nagini was killed while they were back in time. Can't wait for the rest. :D
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  • From Citten on April 02, 2009
    poor hermione! she just has to believe that it was true and that some how some way fate will work in her favor and dracos too! poor stupid draco! i do hope that you will let us know what kind of resption draco got. you know it cant be good but most of all i do hope that you have the time to write us an update and soon!!! :) one thing that would be interesting and, well i would enjoy, would help fate is have her gotten pregant during there time in the past. well it was just a taught to trough in the mix. ;) post soon!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From SilverEyedPhoenix on April 01, 2009
    loved the chapter omg ^_^ horrible horrible draco =[ but i know he felt he had too for her safety.

    Yes you should def beck out the twilight books they're AMAZING!!! ^_^ you could always try downloading the ebooks that works well too.


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