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Reviews for Breaking the Chain

By : RynStar15
  • From apolla92 on March 28, 2009
    damn this fic is so good! i need more, post more asap!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 28, 2009
    Yay, a double helping. Totally delish! And such an emotional gauntlet too. The sex scenes were divine and I feel the need to recite my mantra. "I must not be jealous of a fictional character! I must not be jeaous of a fictional character". Sigh - it's not working here either. LMAO Their intamacy, especially the heated physical rush at the end of the last chapter were perfect. As for Alvida - yaya me for thinking she never died that night but I must say, I did not expect her to be the 'new' owner in France. Loved that twist. Well done! Now I guess we wait and see what happens whey they get back to their own time (if that is indeed where they end up). Oh and I loved how Hermione told Draco about the time they used Polyjuice - I love it when parts of the official books blend their way into fan fics so much that you're not sure which is which. :)
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  • From SilverEyedPhoenix on March 27, 2009
    eeek great chapter really excited about reading the next one!!! ^_^
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  • From SeraphimeRising on March 27, 2009
    Wonderful story. I can't wait to see where it goes next.

    Keep up the good work
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  • From margaritama on March 27, 2009
    As if we're not having enough fun and action - we now get mystery...oooo!
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  • From javolk on March 27, 2009
    WooHoo! Two chapters in one day! I can't wait to find out what happens! Good thing its the weekend!!! ;D
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  • From chickaboo on March 27, 2009
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE let this have a happy ending in which Draco finally pulls his head out of his arse and they end up together. lol Goodness I just can't get enough of this story.
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  • From javolk on March 27, 2009
    Wow! This story is awesome! About how long do you think it will be? Because at this point I wish it could go on forever!
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  • From SilverEyedPhoenix on March 27, 2009
    great story ! I'm really excited to see what else happens ^_^

    update soon

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  • From robbiekoon on March 27, 2009
    I'm relatively new to this pairing and I've read so much Gawdawful stuff that I almost gave up on finding good material, especially after ContraVeritas went down. When I do write, it's not fanfic and there's just so much fanfic that ..... has promise but is in complete need of spell check and a decent beta!

    It's evident that you've outlined what you want to write and I like the character development. D & H start out very in character with canon but they're in a situation requiring them to grow up and handle the life they're creating. Other than a few colloquial things that might be a bit 'out of place' in the 13th century (and as they don't glare they're not worth 'taking points'...lol!), you've really done a bang up job and I look forward to each new chapter. Thanks for putting this out!!! I hope to see more of your work soon.
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  • From kazfeist on March 27, 2009
    So glad you updated. And how wonderful they've got all their stuff again! Can't wait for Draco's decision, and its repercussions. ;D
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  • From chickaboo on March 27, 2009
    Yet another fantastic update. I adore Alvida, and I can't wait for more!!
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  • From dragongirl on March 26, 2009
    This is simply great... If you need and ego bust here is comes: brilliant, magnifincent, ingenius, lovely, funny... Resuming Great!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From From56to62 on March 26, 2009
    hahah sorry, I've been reading your story everyday that you post but I've never left a review. I'm just lame like that. I really really love your story. The amount of imagery you put into your action sequences is astounding! I can picture everything in my head perfectly. And your sex scenes are touching and super hot, which is a CARAZY combination. I can't wait to see what they decide - assuming Draco tells Hermione about staying in the past. Will they choose to stay together, or go back to the future where it will be much more dificult!? Anyway, love love loving it. Like Mcdonald's lol. By the way, if you like d/h your should check out some of my fics.
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  • From distinctlyME on March 26, 2009
    Ahhhh what an interesting interesting take.

    I must say how fast they progressed with their feelings was startling, but I suppose in some way it made sense. I mean love is unpredictable and knows no time limit. And when two people have been dancing through some kind of passion their whole lives....well you know the old attage I'm sure. Thin lines and all that.
    I suppose I just wasn't used to everything developing so dramatically in each chapter. Definitely keeps a reader on their toes!! lol

    I adore this by the way. I began reading the other night...kept falling asleep though(sick) and finally got here and just went "Gahhh I have to give a review. Too good a story not too". I'm very stingy with my reviews. LOL

    I really adore Draco's internal struggles. I mean Hermione was exactly how I expected, naive but passionate and sure. So even though I adore her there's never really a big surprise with her. With Draco in any well written story there's always such an amazing surprise with his internal thoughts and his feelings. I really enjoy his!!!

    My heart is always in my throat while reading, waiting and waiting for the next thing to come at them. It's intense!! haha
    Now my only question is...How did Alvida know that Draco was Draco?

    I mean wasn't it just Sari who had a "feeling" they were coming...and still with that "feeling" she didn't know who and when. So how did Alvida??? Most bizarre.

    I sincerely hope you update soon. I love how fast you do btw. And if you're at all interested in reading some Dramione, check out my story. Come Together.

    Much Love & Respect,
    dM
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