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Reviews for Breaking the Chain

By : RynStar15
  • From redneckpassion on June 29, 2009
    DAMMIT! AGAIN YOU MADE ME CRY!

    T_T It's so sad . . . but sweet . . .

    Love it.
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  • From mag7ical on June 29, 2009
    I think I'm going to disregard the original epilogue & pretend like this is the real one. haha. I actually do like both versions. Great job on the story.
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  • From kazfeist on June 29, 2009
    I loved the alternate epilogue, too. Very nice tying up of loose ends. Am very happy with the progress of Penance and Second Time Around, too. :D
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  • From kazfeist on June 29, 2009
    Very nicely done! You managed to tie in Fred's death in canon, as well. :D
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  • From madeleine on June 29, 2009
    the second ending was a bit far fetched with the Fred thing but i loved it soo much more than the first ending mostly because Hermione and Draco are very much my OTP and can't really stand Hermione with anyone else in a fic that has been focusing on Draco and Hermione, and i really appreciate the time you put down to write this second ending because it really made this crappy day of mine much better:):):)...
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  • From boicrazygirl15 on June 29, 2009
    ohhh i loved it, but surprisingly i like the first ending more because its not ur usual draco/hermione fanfiction, its different. Which is good lol. I can't wait for any more stories u come out with !
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  • From margaritama on June 29, 2009
    lovely -- I still wonder why she never used the time turner to save Draco like they did buckbeak.

    thank you.
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  • From katiekrm on June 29, 2009
    You made me cry and cry when Draco died! I love Fred, but a Dramione is a Dramione! I love the second ending and I'm glad you had them visit the past again b/c I was missing those people. I totally did not even catch the "loves" as opposed to loved and I usually catch things like that! I think I was too disgruntled about how things were turning out. rofl I was still po'd about everyone being willing to sacrifice Hermione and her constantly being tortured and then to not have Draco on top of it?! And then I was so damn sad! I swear, you put my emotions through the gauntlet. I am so happy with the second ending. Great story!
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  • From dragongirl on June 29, 2009
    To be honest with you I love the alternative more than the one you gave.. Please tissue alerts... But if I were you I will leave them both for future readers ..
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  • From katiekrm on June 28, 2009
    CH.22 I don't care if they are in a war, the Order is a bunch of a**holes for asking Hermione to do this. Sacrifice yourselves, scumbags. I loved the Ron line about repenting by doing the dishes. And then the explanation of the only reason they are there is b/c she sealed the door. A good place for some comic relief.
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  • From desespoir on June 19, 2009
    I am absolutely obsessed with this story. You take what is a "cliche" concept (although it's one of my favorites) and give it a refreshing and utterly brilliant twist. The characterizations are wonderful and I just love it. I love all of it.

    By the way, it's such a huge compliment that you're enjoying Linger - thank you so much for the feedback on that. You have no idea how much it means to me. I will start Penance this weekend! Please write more. You're amazing.
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  • From LondonParis on May 30, 2009
    I had to create an account and delurk because YOU MADE ME CRY. And not even a little bit. Tissues were necessary. I hated the ending but I loved the story and you broke my heart with the last chapter, you really did. Well done!
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  • From DragonHeartstring on May 29, 2009
    What a great ending:) I was a little hesitant at first but the final chapter almost made me cry. I cannot wait for your next chapter in Penance!

    By the way this is subility's friend;)
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  • From incognito on May 27, 2009
    Oh!!! I agree with boicrazygirl! Please write the alternative endings, especially the one in which Draco survives and they live happily ever after. Right?
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  • From boicrazygirl15 on May 27, 2009
    oh my godd i cried and im not ashamed to admit it.. this was such a great story!! you dont even know. ahh im still crying doesnt seem fair but if i was in dracos position i would have done the same thing!

    Now what I want to know is what the other endings were.. you should like write them anyways and have like alternate endings like some movies have.. so we know how the story would have ended if we picked one of the other choices!!

    love it, definate classic now. xx
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