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Reviews for Killer Queen

By : LilLolaBlue
  • From SalonKitty on March 16, 2009
    Hmm, is that the end? It's an interesting tale, to be sure. I like your style of writing, but some of the prose is so purple I'm sort of taken out of the scene. This piece seems AU to me. I don't really know who these people are as their character traits have just the barest minimum of their canon counterparts. Harry and Ginny speak like they just stepped out of Swingin' 60s London while Ginny with her older suitors often use expressions and language as if she were a working girl in 19th century Whitechapel or something.

    I almost wish this had been Harry's story, as I am very curious to know how he got from the boy we are familiar with to this hard-living, coke-snorting, rapscallion type. It's a bit of a stretch, but you could make me believe it with a bit more background. Otherwise, you have some very interesting ideas that you haven't quite fleshed out in this new canvas. An awful lot is taken for granted, but I suppose I'm having trouble resigning myself to this group of bleak sods who haven't even been through the worst of the war yet and talking like they've been to hell and back.

    You know, I'll tell you, though--I've always wanted to attempt a Harry Potter story revolving around the 120 Days of Sodom by the Marquis de Sade (and to a greater extent, the film adaptation, Salo), so you're version of Voldemort, n
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