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Reviews for Not All that Glitters is Gold

By : ricerabbit
  • From mhaj78 on March 23, 2009
    OMG FREAKING EXCELLENT. I looooved that Draco reacted with that kind of passion. I feel like you have created the scene inside Hermione's head so well! I really enjoyed the chapter, thanks!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 20, 2009
    Where's our next chapter :(
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  • From mhaj78 on March 19, 2009
    FREAKING EXCELLENT. Every day this week I have looked forward to coming home to one of your delicious, salacious chapters! Thanks for never disappointing. :)
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  • From margaritama on March 19, 2009
    Okay so Narcissa is gone. I was wondering because I can't imagine she would have been comfortable with what they were doing to Hermione, muggleborn or not. She's a young girl after all.

    Lucius is a randy, dirty bastard isn't he? I do realize its all rape nonetheless but at least he's not beating the shit out of her. She hates it all its true. Right now I find Lucius to be very interesting - how he feels about Hermione, his station and position, his life, his son - he's a walking contradiction at times and not to be taken at face value.

    Draco is just childish, churlish and mean. I don't see anything of value right now, beating a woman is just too much. He made her bleed and broke her bones and I don't know how she would ever forgive or forget that. I know, I know...wait and see, and I will but I just want to take a bottle to his face so badly (sorry I'm so violent). His comment about feeding her -- what did he think that she'd never eat?

    Hermione needs a break and a bath for goodness sakes also. Give the girl some alone time. I was surprised she kept her eyes on Lucius, I would have expected her to slyly look around. I would like to know more of what she is forming in her head - she's still incredibly brilliant and I'm sure he wheels never stop turning.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 19, 2009
    I'm sorry I've kept quiet for so long but thought I just HAD to compliment you on this fic. I LOVE it! I really really can't wait for the next chapter. I love how you've kept the characters true to form. The experienced Lucius knowing he would have to give her some level of care to get out of her what he wants, spoilt lil Draco being a dick but already beginning to craze her. And our heroine Hermione, as strong and resilient as ever. I commend you and can't wait for the next chapter :) So please don't be too long. :D
    V xxx
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  • From leValkyrie on March 18, 2009
    I just read this story all the way from the beginning and I absolutely love it!! This is a great story so far and i cant wait to read your next update!
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  • From margaritama on March 18, 2009
    Yep, Draco's an asshole, raping bastard. No Stockholm Syndrome for Hermione, oh please. I'm finding it hard to see him as anything but the sadist he is. At least Lucius was semi-gentle. I would like to see what he's thinking. I think the elves are going to befriend our battered heroine.

    Any chance for her to work on her wandless magic? Despite what they think she's very strong and powerful.
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  • From scarletwitchextreme on March 18, 2009
    Stockholm Syndrome maybe but not after chapter 6 it would be suicide and dumb for her to feel anything but hate for him. I loved how u are putting the various POVs and I am glad we got to read from his POV but still he is an idiot he raped her again. The boy is mad and I like your explaination of him that he tired of living shadows well to me he put himself there. And I love, love that there is no cover for hermione's mouth even though she will be severely punished, and draco is just weak when he is raping her cause thats the only way that he will get some fear out of her. But please let hermione get justice in the end.

    Respect
    Scarlet
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  • From jacqui on March 18, 2009
    Any idea how many chapters this story will have? I like what you have so far. And I agree, I prefer a defiant Hermione with some fight in her.
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  • From scarletwitchextreme on March 18, 2009
    hey ricerabbit,
    thanks for the online nod and I loved the chapter I loved the foreplay between hermione and lucius and the fact that she still has her fire and fight left in her, I love lucius practised domination but I dont see hermione giving in to draco or caring for him in any way or format he is just too volemortish in his cruelties it would be wierd if she just develops feelings for him. Please keep up the good work and update soon.

    Respect
    Scarlet
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  • From margaritama on March 17, 2009
    so this Draco has nothing redeemable about him AT ALL. what a bastard.
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  • From scarletwitchextreme on March 17, 2009
    so that was brutal last chapter, 3 chapters in and my head is spinning, its bloody sadistic, I love it, pplease keep it up and update soon.
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  • From scarletwitchextreme on March 17, 2009
    i to have read that story "plaything" just recently in fact and it was a very good story and it was sad that it was never finished but I hope your story gets finished beacause I am liking it alot so far and I have only read the first chapter.
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  • From bananasforyou on March 16, 2009
    awesommmmme!
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