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From YamiBakura on April 09, 2009
Chapter 8

'Enjoying' is an understatement. I'm riveted to this fic like I've been nailed to it. I realise that I sound creepy and stalkerish, and I'm not about to make it any less so - I've been reading all your old fanfics over the past few days, too, and am constantly surprised and amazed by the sheer differences; from a loving and kind Malfoy family to overbearing and possessive, and all your different-but-perfect characterisations of Draco (Harry's pretty much the same, any way you spin him, but that's mostly because you've got so much of Harry handed to you in the books, whereas Draco's a complete mystery. Still, even he's different enough from fic to fic to make it believable, and that's part of the allure.)

I was so happy to see Harry get out of the country, and also find someone in Spain whom he liked, and liked him back, and for a moment, when I realised that Draco was being called to his side, I was afraid that he'd find them in flagrante delicto but they didn't get a chance to get that far. XD I can't wait to see what happens next; I can't believe they're fighting, after they both went through all that trouble. XD
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From YanaYugi on April 09, 2009
aww i was enjoying that
you write really good stories
please will the next chapter be out soon
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From YamiBakura on April 08, 2009
Chapter 7

Games. I love games. x3 You cannot possibly be updating this fast enough for me to be happy, but I'm thrilled that you update as fast as you do anyway. I can't get the silly grin off my face over this. It makes me want to start writing anonymous letters to someone, myself, XDD This is nothing less than perfect, and I love it.
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From ANON - butterpie on April 08, 2009
Well the game has stepped up several notches now hasn't it? Sympathetic magic seems to get the best results as Harry has given Draco more ammo to locate him. Boy that Malfoy certainly stirred up a heap of emotions here, especially since Astoria gave away a rather telling clue about the depth of guilt, and no doubt other emotions that abound in this mysterious person he is seeking. Love makes people act foolishly, but anger can leave you wide open before you remember to think things out. The remarks in that letter were well planned as they honed in on everything Harry would never accept in a relationship. This just keeps getting better, as Harry must now decide what to do as the tables have turned on him. I look forward to what you have up you sleeve next, so by all meants please continue.
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From ANON - Clau on April 08, 2009
I just LOVE your story. A chase between a cat and a mouse, both switching roles at times, taunting, cunning. I'm breathless by the end of every chapter, unable to bear the wait for the next (though you update quite frequently, THANK YOU ♥ )

Harry made the mistake of revealing that he defeated his share of Dark wizards, and Draco knows that his writer could be someone connected to the Auror Department. He has his proof now. I feel the end is near...!
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From ANON - DHnotHD on April 08, 2009
Chapter 7 is great! Clever Draco! Clever, manipulative, sneaky... AWESOME! You write Draco sooooo well!!! I prefer to think of Harry as pure and innocent (and a little dense, and the kind of person who does things without thinking twice before doing them, so that works too).
I'm looking forward to chapter 8.
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From ANON - SP777 on April 08, 2009
about #7...

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From thrnbrooke on April 08, 2009
Soooo need chapter 8!!! Draco might be pushing Harry into his web but he might lose him in the process!!! Soooo need chapter 8!!!
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From ANON - MewMew2 on April 07, 2009
Well then. Thank you for updating once more. I must say, the more I read this fic, the more I hear the music from 'Code Geass' playing inside of my head. Excellent job! I love an engaging piece of fiction!
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From Juana13 on April 07, 2009
awwww!!!
draco is gonna find out soon, isn't he?
oooh, cant wait to see his reaction!
although i do feel sorry that harry is losing control.
we all knew he would, but it's still slightly upsetting to read it.
and i do hope that draco and harry are equals. i love seeing either harry or draco as dominant, but i think in this story it'd be nice to see them as equals.
hope its somewhat of a happy ending for them both, at least
cant wait for your next update!! i love how ur updating so soon!
looking forward to the next chapter!!

: )
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From ANON - SP777 on April 06, 2009
about #6...

Damn it to hell....damn it to HELL!!!! Damn it to BLOODY Hell!! Why did you
leave it at THAT point!!!

That's like getting all excited from intense foreplay, then the DAMN phone
rings!!! I want another chapter NOW!!!
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*ahem* on tha' serious tip, I can HONESTLY say it's been a LOOOONG time since I've gotten excited over a story/chapter....you're getting better at the action, even if it IS sexually-charged. :-)

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From thrnbrooke on April 05, 2009
Sooooo need chapter 7!!!!
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From ANON - Luvdonite on April 05, 2009
I think that just how Harry wants to teach Draco about humility, Draco can teach him about his martyr complex. I'm excited that the action's starting. I can't wait till Draco finds that it's Harry. I think that it'll be really explosive. I also love how Harry was doing the chasing like a little ferret, and he's the one running like a coward now. lol. Anyways, I'm really glad that Astoria's been booted out. I think she should've received a swift kick in the @#& for having the nerve to come between destiny. lol. anyways, great writing as usual.
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From YamiBakura on April 05, 2009
Chapter 6

This was such a surprising update. x3 Not because of what happened, but just because I wasn't expecting it. It was a very pleasant surprise, though. I can't tell you how excited I am to see the next chapter. And you promised in another review-reply that the contest of wills is just beginning. *happy* I'm already in love with your portrayal of Draco in this. I can't wait to see how it unfolds.
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From ANON - Izzy on April 05, 2009
This is one of my FAVORITE stories!! Please update!! I can't WAIT for more!
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