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By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - DHnotHD on April 05, 2009
    What an exciting chapter, I can hardly wait for chapter 7! I thought that Astoria would hear some of Harry's thoughts about his feelings about Draco, but it seems he could control what he would pass on to her, very interesting.
    And thanks for the explanation about the polyjuice, for some reason, I thought it might be something Harry would be able to get without too much difficulty (being the Hero and all), but maybe it is like ordering a pair of glasses and indeed takes up a long time to obtain.
    I really enjoyed the chase scene, Bravo Draco for your seeker-like reflexes, and Harry was very good as well, it couldn't have been easy running under a cloak.
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  • From tiggator on April 05, 2009
    Wow. Love the chase. He was so close! I'm at least glad to know that Draco knows it's not Astoria now. It had to be hurting her, too, especially writing that last letter. Clearly Harry knows Draco more than she does. I wonder if Draco will be able to put it together. I mean how many people own invisibility cloaks? Nice chapter! :)
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on April 05, 2009
    Excellent! Please update once more when you find the chance.
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  • From tar on April 05, 2009
    I just love your story, can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From thrnbrooke on April 05, 2009
    Soo need chapter 7!! Draco just had a major clue! How many people own an invisibility cloak?
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  • From Juana13 on April 04, 2009
    oh this is just getting so much better and better!!!!!! *squeals*
    i cannot wait for the next update!!! what's going to happen? its goin to be so sad to see harry in the next chapter. wonder if draco will figure out who is writer is by next chapter too. i almost feel sorry for astoria, too.
    loving this story more and more!!! cant wait for the next chapter!!! looking forward to it!!!! : )
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  • From ANON - butterpie on April 04, 2009
    Gee, Malfoy felt the cloak that hid his writer, and who is well known for owning one both at Hogwarts and most likely even now? Gosh darn it when is Malfoy going to accept that his writer is someone he knows probably as well as his opponent seems to understand what compels him to remain essentially his own person in spite of what others think of him? Liken unto a hound bred to the chase that is the lure of the hunt will he be determined enough to flush out his prey and end this battle of wits, or will the fox elude him forever more, leaving him frustrated and defeated? No I don't think so. Perhaps its time for a little tete-a-tete with the only person who knows. Will Astoria help or hinder Malfoy? I'd really give alot to see her hold her own against Malfoy if only to see her in a better light as she deserves some respect if only for being caught in this mess between these two childish males . Maybe with her even trying to convince Harry to step forward as well. As always another wonderful gifty from you to us all, so please continue to dazzle like the star you are!
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  • From rfernandez on April 04, 2009
    This story is really sexy in way. Harry and Draco are both too clever for their own good, and I just love the way they communicate back and forth, thinking that they can out best each other. I like that Harry isn't giving it yet, but it will be fun to read when he does. I look forward to how Draco will make Harry admitt that he is the writer of the letters, I am sure that that part will be very enjoyable indeed. I wonder if Draco will be tricked by the latest scheme of Harry's, but I don't think he will, since he is already convinced that the writer is a man. I look forward to the next update!
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  • From ANON - DHnotHD on April 04, 2009
    Looking forward to chapter 6!!! Although I am a bit worried that it might end up being a top!Harry story, please warn me if it is going to be that.
    Wouldn't it be easier for Harry to just polyjuice himself into Astoria? That way he would be telling the truth about being the writer of the letters and the handwriting would be a spot-on match.
    I was so sure Draco would have figured out it was Harry as he was adding up all the clues, but I guess he was just too excited to think straight (pun intended).
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  • From YamiBakura on April 03, 2009
    Chapter 5

    LSDKGJSDG. GYAAAAAH. ONOES. NOOOO! How could you leave it there? I'm DYING. I honestly thought for just a second that Harry would be the one to meet him, but then it's not, and what are they going to do about the handwriting difference?! AAAAH! I have to knoooooow!!!!
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  • From lockheart on April 03, 2009
    I love this story it is such an interesting concept. Please continue.
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  • From ANON - butterpie on April 03, 2009
    So thanks to his dear mama Draco is getting warmer as he slowly begins to expose his mystery writer. I wonder if Harry realizes just how overconfident he's been with all those telling clues to his identity. It certainly will be an explosion of epic proportions when the pieces finally fall into place. After all Draco was hailed as the Prince of Slytherin for a reason. Hopefully Draco will be receptive to a male lover as his best match as Harry himself is at heart a Slytherin in spite of his Gryffindor background. I only hope that this ends in the best way for Astoria as well. So with that said please continue with this wonderful tale of yours!
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  • From thrnbrooke on April 02, 2009
    I soooo soooo sooooo need chapter 6!!! I hope Harry fails!!! I sooo want Harry happy!!!
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  • From Juana13 on April 02, 2009
    ooooh its just getting better and better, huh? hahahaha
    cant wait to find out what happens next!!!
    update soon please! cant wait!

    oh, and its so cool to see draco slowly coming around to the idea of having a male lover. this will be awesome : )
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on April 02, 2009
    Fantastic job! Thank you for finding the time to update, you have me doing Sous-sus in the wing. Please update once more when you have the time.
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