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Reviews for Providence

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From tiggator on April 01, 2009
    Mothers know everything. :) haha I like how you ended it like that. Very good, making us definitely want more. I mean now we're left with the "omg, how's he going to react about that?!" Harry's letter was perfect. I loved the line about him wanting an equal. Keep up the good work! :)
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  • From ANON - Blur on April 01, 2009
    This story is so creative! I love it! Can't wait for the next update! ^_^
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on April 01, 2009
    *laughs* excellent job inserting Mrs Malfoy's opinion into the story, an unbiased non involved character to make observations was just perfect. Thank you for posting!
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  • From fanficmom on April 01, 2009
    AWESOME!!

    Very few stories can keep me at the edge of my seat waiting for another chapter. And i read most of the ones posted. And for me to take the time to review means the story is extra ordinary! I love it waiting impatiently for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - butterpie on April 01, 2009
    Well isn't Narcissa the smart one, but really to write oneself as a conquerer well I must say that smacks of being written by a man who has a strength of force to best Draco. The obvious answer is seldom found at first as Draco is only short-sighted enough to look for a female author, but now I can't help wondering what is next as he discovers the where abouts of that dratted bird and his owner. Hermione is only trying to help Harry, but she should really understand her friend can be quite stubborn, especially when he is emotionally invested in the results. Sometimes no matter how much we try to spare a person from self harm, and this definitely counts as such it is a lesson never learnt until it is experienced first hand. Loving to see where you go with this, so by all means please continue.
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  • From ANON - Luvdonite on April 01, 2009
    gasp. poor Draco. too many blows in one day. leave it to Narcissa to figure it out
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  • From gentlenightrain on March 31, 2009
    XD!!!!!!!! cant wait!!!
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  • From thrnbrooke on March 31, 2009
    Oh Narcissa just ruined everything!!! I sooooo need chapter 5!!! Hermione should know Harry's stubborn streak by now!
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  • From Juana13 on March 31, 2009
    OMG!!!!!!!!!!
    oooh, that was a good move sending in narcissa like that. terrible for harry though! is draco even gay? god, way to add a huge twist. perfect ending
    hahahahahaha
    i bet that little statement finally opened draco's eyes a bit. sux for harry though. i hate to see harry so uncomfortable, but it'll be so fun to see the predator suddenly become the prey. yes, perfect idea! hahahahaha
    well, i absolutely cannot wait for your next update!
    great writing so far. thanks for acknowledging my review.
    looking forward to your next update!!!! : )
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on March 30, 2009
    Delicious. Thank you so much for finding the time to post. Please do so again, you've done an excellent job so far.
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  • From ANON - Luvdonite on March 29, 2009
    really great chapter

    "behold the signature of your conqueror" I love that line. i really do
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  • From ANON - butterpie on March 28, 2009
    Well, that was some first date, especially when Astoria's womanly intuition kicked in at some point that somehow this was not such a great idea afterall. It must be rather depressing to realize that Draco only considered her after first reading the letters she supposedly sent him. A woman prefers to be wanted for herself as a unique indivdual, and that is perhaps for the best. Unfortunately Harry's encouragement to her may only allow this farce to continue and do more harm then good as Draco begins to dig deeper for his hidden author who seems to know him best of all. Tough nookies as he still thinks his writer is a female to boot. What's next I wonder, maybe it's time for the "Golden Trio" to confer and really do a number on the suave Slytherin once more, and turn up the intensity on Malfoy. Surely between the three of them, and maybe with some help for the rest of the gang a mystery can become even more comical as he remains both baffled and intrigued as to who is this person who knows him so well. I only hope poor Astoria makes up her mind about this crazy turn of affairs. So anywho please continue as I await your next installment you clever minx you!
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  • From thrnbrooke on March 27, 2009
    OH Draco is one smart cookie! I soooo need chapter 4!!! He thinks this is a woman! Wonder what he'll think when he finds out it's Harry!
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  • From Juana13 on March 27, 2009
    ooooh! harry's in trouble! god, i love the cliffy of that last sentence. draco is too smart for his own good, its kinda scary : ) but i knew he'd figure it out soon enough, i just didnt think that soon...
    what will harry do now? will he confront him. i think its too early for that. but its your story, so you decide : ) though, it'd be cool if draco found out first instead of harry just telling him.
    talk about suspense. hahahahaha
    cant wait for you to update again! hope you continue soon. looking sooooo forward to it!!!!!!
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  • From Lunatichero on March 24, 2009
    I am so falling in love with this story. Our theater department did 'Cyrano de Bergerac' last semester, and even if this ends like that,
    namely, in a very bad sort of way, I have the feeling I shall enjoy my broom ride into the depths of depression.
    thanks,
    Lunatic with a Hero Complex
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