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By : From56to62
  • From Monddame on September 29, 2009
    I have the same tendency: to apologize for pieces of my writing that I think are weak. However, I disagree that your first two paragraphs "suck balls". They're fine. Good even. So get over it and quit apologizing! haha You know it doesn't help to draw attention to weak points, right?
    Anyway, can't say I'm enjoying your story (as in, I don't enjoy hearing about people hurting themselves), but I can say that I am enthralled by it. Nothing better than well motivated angst, eh? I'm interested to see how you keep up the dark/angsty tenor of the story with what must come next without destroying everyone. Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Yay-Girl on September 29, 2009
    Good chapter, I like this story...i hope that you update soon.
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  • From ANON - Paigeey07 on September 29, 2009
    Oh yeah!!!! More please?!?!
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  • From kazfeist on September 29, 2009
    I'm so glad you updated....it's been a while. I am looking forward to seeing how you help Draco through Hermione's compassion and kindness. Surely she's got some ideas? :D
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  • From marieriddle20 on September 29, 2009
    want more
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  • From dragongirl on September 29, 2009
    Please make Draco safe, and make of course Hermione the saviour.. AHHHHHHH Love is in the air. LOL
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 24, 2009
    this is amazing i love cant wait to read more
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  • From ANON - Carmen on September 04, 2009
    -reviews- Cookiez please! ;D

    Other then the cookie, I LOVE this story, I cried in chapter nine, omg! Damn Draco! I would mind seeing a extrememly jealous Draco until he gets back with Hermione ;D That'll teach the lil'bastard LOL!

    I don't know if you do this but do you send updates to people when you update your story? Or do you have a website or something for that?

    If you don't, that's fine! I'll just check back every 1-2 weeks. :]

    Thanks!

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  • From ANON - Carmen on September 04, 2009
    -reviews- Cookiez please! ;D

    Other then the cookie, I LOVE this story, I cried in chapter nine, omg! Damn Draco! I would mind seeing a extrememly jealous Draco until he gets back with Hermione ;D That'll teach the lil'bastard LOL!

    I don't know if you do this but do you send updates to people when you update your story? Or do you have a website or something for that?

    If you don't, that's fine! I'll just check back every 1-2 weeks. :]

    Thanks!
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  • From Kate0992 on August 29, 2009
    ohh my goddd, this is amazing
    i've been dying for you to put this chapter up!
    i feel sorry for both of them here, though :(! x
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  • From dragongirl on August 27, 2009
    This was intense, very, his depression is very deep and cutting do not help but hey is part of the fic and the story line.. Couls we hope for a happy ending at least? And more smut? LOL
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  • From kazfeist on August 27, 2009
    Poor Draco! Why is it that in almost every story, his preferred method of dealing with his future is to push Hermione away? And she's usually so observant, why can't she figure it out? Anyway, looking forward to seeing how you get them back together. :D
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  • From margaritama on August 27, 2009
    My heart is as broken as Hermione's....wonder what you have in store for us to make him see the light.
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  • From ANON - CuddleStrike on August 27, 2009
    Hey,
    Nice to see a new chapter up, I was wondering what happened to this story o0
    Umm... I feel a tad... weird but I believe some critiquing is due.
    I found you did this several times...(e.g. below, I caps it for you)

    'Finding it simply impossible not to take action against such absurd behavior, on Friday evening, Hermione HAS made her decision; she is going to get answers out of him if it is the last thing she does. '
    It appears to me... there are issues on the tense and the narrative.
    Personally, I think it would have read easier like...
    'Finding it simply impossible not to take action against such absurd behavior, on Friday evening, Hermione HAD made her decision; she is going to get answers out of him if it is the last thing she does.'

    I know, minor details but... it happens regularly in your sentences... I noticed this in your previous chapter when rereading (I must have just auto 'corrected' in my head when first reading)
    Like the next paragraph...

    'Sometime in that same hour, following a sort of impromptu plan, Hermione Granger FINDS herself hidden behind a rather ridiculously large stack of books in the Hogwarts Library.'
    Wouldn't it be more fluid changing 'finds' to 'found' ??? So that it read as, '...following a sort of impromptu plan, Hermione Granger found herself hidden...'

    These are just suggestions... I've just noticed it upon reading and breaks the flow of the story focusing on minor details like that.
    Otherwise I'm loving this plot line and the self-harm issue... it's not a normal FF plot line... I think anyway.


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  • From GreenAndSilverTie on August 27, 2009
    I really liked this chapter! It had a very sad tone but I get why Draco's doing this.
    Thanks for posting.
    G&ST
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