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By : From56to62
  • From MagicQuill73 on August 16, 2009
    This story is amazing. You've really gotten into Draco's head for this. To be able to put words to his misery, the way you have, leaves me speechless. I love the way that you're writing this in present tense. It's something different and I'm enjoying it as if I'm right there with them.
    One small thing tho. You've been using the word 'then' and not 'than'. For example: "I'm better. Then you are." This would show that the speaker is making a list. Then is usually substituted for 'and'. "I'm better than you are," would mean that the speaker is making a comparison. It's a common mistake and I often catch myself making it. Other than that, your story is coming along beautifully.
    Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - mirumototsubasa on August 10, 2009
    I like the way you describe things. There is an almost elemental flow. I'm not normally a fan of the whole cutting thing, but I do like your story. :) Keep updating!
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  • From ANON - Eryn on August 04, 2009
    LOVE this!!! Please don't stop now!! I want to know what happens next!
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on July 25, 2009
    Bad reader! Bad!!! I am so sorry. I just realized I hadn't reviewed and I sincerely apologize. I have waited with anticipation for each chapter and I now wait for more soon. His pain is so sad and his confusion palpable. His conversation with Blaise just heightened the depression factor. I do hope he somehow quickly learns to cope with his confusion, fear and pain without cutting himself. And, I hope he comes to realize what a true friend Blaise seems like he could be. I look forward to more REALLY soon, okay? Thanks! HG4eva
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  • From ANON - Katy, x on July 21, 2009
    whooaa omg this fic is amaazing :D!! i want more :)!

    x
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  • From kazfeist on July 20, 2009
    Well I am glad you updated, but I am hoping you'll not have Draco solve all his problems with a blade. Or Blaise. God, that was bad, even for me. Keep updating!
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  • From ANON - heytuesday on July 12, 2009
    I must say I love your story. I didn't see any grammar mistakes, so good job. I can't wait to see what happens next.I like how both Hermoine and Draco aren't drastically out of character. I would also love you forever if you updated soon because I hate cliffies.
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  • From dragongirl on July 11, 2009
    They are 17 and boys the only thing they talk is sex anb bubs, notning else... Not surprising... but hey keep them coming. And please make this one the last cut or at least save him from the Mark or make him go to the Headmaster or his godfather.. Anything but same my beautiful and sexy Draco please.... LOL
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  • From ANON - Liz on July 10, 2009
    Great two chapters!! I really enjoyed the ending here
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  • From margaritama on July 10, 2009
    oh my what is up with Blaise? perhaps he should have eased Draco's fears which could be seen a mile away...and what will Hermione find in that bathroom?
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  • From ANON - Mel on July 09, 2009
    This is the first time I read your story. I'm so glad I did. It's great!
    I love how you haven't rushed their relationship and yet have written sufficient smut to keep the reader satisfied.
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  • From ANON - laura on July 07, 2009
    this is such a great story. please, update soon. i love the connection and angst hermione and draco have. this has to be my favorite story on this site.
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  • From marieriddle20 on July 07, 2009
    just read the fic...i really like it...as for the songs i never understood with puting songs with story thats not a song-fic...but many do...anyway love the story cant wait for more
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  • From ANON - purityrayne on July 03, 2009
    Hey, just letting you know... I adore this story. I was at first put off by Draco cutting himself but then as i read it... i almost can see it with all of the crap he has to put up with. I love the mixed humor and angst and eroticness (so not a word) of it all. good work. ^.^
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  • From ANON - StrikeMeCuddles on July 01, 2009
    Hey, Just read your very last commment.
    I just found your story tonight... (well this morning techniquely) and I honestly enjoyed this a lot. Please continue? I know it must be disheartening to not receive reviews all the time, but alas, most people are probably like me and don't bother commenting. (Lazy I know.)
    So yes, CONTINUE!
    I'm intrigued a lot by this type of perception of Draco.
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