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Reviews for There Is A Thin Line Between Hate And Love

By : Catium
  • From Annecia89 on October 02, 2014
    I loved it and the journal entries made it bittersweet :')
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  • From Mdunlap on November 04, 2009
    I did almost offer you some help but not everyone appreciates hearing that they are not perfect. I would like it if you would send the entire document, in WORD preferably, to mdunlapca@yahoo.com. I accept beta material at that address. My daughter has given me a cold and it just hit today but I will get it back to you this weekend probably.

    I hadn't realized that you have written other stories. I should check them out.

    Cissa
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  • From Mdunlap on November 01, 2009
    Okay, the bad new first? As I was reading this, I couldn't help wondering what your first language is. You write wonderfully in English but you do make the same small errors over and over. Me and My and Think and Thing are the best examples. The words to, two, and too are more than slightly confusing, I will give you that. Sometimes, the punctuation makes it difficult to figure out what is going on. I realized that if you read it out loud, it would make sense. That's what gave it away. You might think about getting a beta, someone to just read it over and correct any mistakes.

    The good news? It is a very good story, good pacing, snappy dialogue. Definitely, it is worth the time to fix.
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  • From SilentDreamer on April 21, 2009
    OMG!! Sooo sad and sweet and awesome!! I seriously... *sighs* Beautiful work!! Can't wait for another!!
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  • From thrnbrooke on April 16, 2009
    I am soooo very sad to see this end! What a fantastic story!!! Sounds like Harry and Draco had very full and fulfilling lives!
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  • From thrnbrooke on April 16, 2009
    Wow! They lived a full and happy life together! I'm soooo sad to see this end! Fantastic story!
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  • From thrnbrooke on April 14, 2009
    Only 2 more chapters? No!!! I soooo need chapter 18 though! What of the DEs who are students in the school?
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  • From Veracityrules on April 08, 2009
    Awesome!
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  • From Veracityrules on April 08, 2009
    You're dead right, this chapter does deserve a review.

    Anyway, they to err is human; forgive divine. Therefore, you must be an angel to forgive my review omission. However, if your writings mirror your personality then.........you're a wicked angel!

    ):)

    Great updates btw.
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  • From thrnbrooke on April 08, 2009
    Soooo need chapter 16!!! Blaise is in danger!!!
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  • From thrnbrooke on April 06, 2009
    Draco you fool! Blaise could have been playing you! You told him a lot more then you think you did! Idiot! Poor Harry!
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  • From Veracityrules on April 06, 2009
    OMG, please forgive me, after your last update I checked and realised that I'd not reviewed your story and then this is the best bit...I just read this update and realised I'd done it again!

    I have been following this story since it was published and I think it's great. I cannot apologise enough about not leaving you any reviews, as this is totally out of character for me.

    I love the plot and sub-plot and the especially long chapters ( I love long chapters). Please write more and update soon as I'm not known for my patience ;)
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  • From thrnbrooke on April 06, 2009
    Sooooo need chapter 13!!!
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  • From thrnbrooke on April 02, 2009
    Sooooo need chapter 11!!! Harry enjoyed that kiss just a bit tooo much!!! Poor Harry! Draco has him confused!
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  • From Juana13 on April 02, 2009
    aw! I just read this, and it is so awesome! harry and draco kissed!
    but harry ran away : (
    i feel so bad for draco. i hope harry comes to his senses and goes back to draco.
    cant wait for more! looking forward to the next chapter! hopefully, harry and draco reunite, and maybe a smut scene with them...? *wink, wink*
    hahahahaha, anyway, hope you update soon!!! : )
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