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By : ricerabbit

From ANON - Anon on April 09, 2009
LOL Well I'm glad you're happy reading my thoughts, I tend to delve right into the stories I'm enjoying and sometimes a one sentence review just isn't enough (for me). Again I agree with your assessments of both Hermione and Draco and also of Nott. I remember reading about that too. Or should I say Hot Nott because he is coming across rather deliciously too. ;) (as Margaritama puts it)

Anyways, that was deliriously hot (and funny) from start to finish. I love the idea of them having spent the night together and that they are letting themselves have some happiness. Their teasing banter of having to watch their so called respective dates paw the other at Hogsmeade had me nearly off my chair laughing. And ah, that last peppering of passionate kisses before they went their seperate ways back to the dorms. Le sigh!

ROFL at Ron's predicament and my goodness, he still doesn't get it, does he? Then again, he didn't tell Luna to buggar off and he did put up woth a lot of her antics and he was reading the book she showed him so maybe he's not as clueless as it first seemed.

As for the whole seduction scene in the store - HOT, HOT, HOT. I want some of that. LMAO And as for Theo - well here I am thinking that perhaps the real reason who took on Blaise's dare was because he secretly fancied Hermone anyway and saw the opportunity and went for it. Obviously he has no hard feelings about what happened and is very pleased for his friend's budding romance too. He is indeed a good friend to Draco. I like that. :)
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From margaritama on April 09, 2009
Dear goodness, that ending was delicious...I have chills at how cavalier Draco behaved. I also adored the ending. I really like this happier Draco. I mean we know he can be a git and selfish but when he gives himself, its all or nothing isn't it?

So, the story is longer than 12/13 chappies. I'm wondering what now? What about the war? Will Draco defect with Hot Nott? And will Pansy get her comeupance? LOL
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From automatikjoy on April 09, 2009
I started reading your story last night and
I just finished chapter 13
:) Im really enjoying it!
Ive never read a Draco/Hermione fic but
this ones really good

update soon???
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From margaritama on April 09, 2009
well crap, Draco is up that creek with out a paddle and barely a boat. he's trying to keep everything afloat and can barely manage. WOW.

I'm very curious how you'll handle everything with the war, Voldy and our two protagonists growing affection?
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From ANON - Anon on April 08, 2009
Love seeing things from Draco's perspective. I always like to be inside everyone's mind. :) He must be doing his head in trying to seperate all the dfferent aspects of his life, trying to keep himself alive, understanding his feelings for Hermione, deal with the feeling that people only respect him for the Malfoy name and not being exactly sure where he stands with Snape either. And his father, well that's a differnt dilemma entirely. Whew!!

His friendship with Theo is perfect, especially when we find out Theo is more intelligent and observant than he lets on and he can see from both perspectives that Hermione and Draco like each other. :) And he's very loyal to Draco, I like that, he might be one of the few that truly are.

Squeeeeeeeeeee!! Madam Pomfrey told Draco that Hermione was there. I was so hoping she'd let it 'slip'. I guess Theo isn't the only cunning one at Hogwarts. LOL I get the impression she rather has a soft spot for Draco too.

So Pansy confesses but Draco has a little too much on his mind right now to fully register what she's done but being a Slytherin, perhaps he was already thinking ahead as to ways he could take advantage of the situation. And it was a good thing for Pansy that they got interrupted, I think. LOL

And aww what a sweet way to end the chapter, he almost seemed content, at peace. Of course, that won't last long, will it? :)

Oh and I agree on the whole Pansy/Draco romance, it's too calculated, not sure if I should even use the word 'romance' there. LOL And I love your romantic Pomfrey - she worked in perfectly. :) Ron and Luna is hilarious and you're right, if I were Ginny I wouldn't explain it to him either. (but I'd encourage him to go) LMAO
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From apolla92 on April 08, 2009
brilliant chapters! i can't wait for more!
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From mhaj78 on April 08, 2009
Oh my gosh, that is BEAUTIFUL. What great insight--I loved reading the flipside of the same chapter! (reminds me of how much I love Midnight Sun alongside Twilight...or at least what's written of it). Great story, thanks for writing!
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From dragongirl on April 08, 2009
Love this Draco POV, at last he knows the feeling is a little deeper... Ok is getting closer to the final battle outch!!!!!! I hope there is many mischiefs before that dramatical moment.. LOL
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From margaritama on April 08, 2009
Hmmm - Pansy going ballistic on negative pregnacy tests...maybe Hermione should tell Draco THAT bit of news. He did want to know something he didn't know, right?

I'm sure he knows that Pansy slipped her the potion...question is will he tell Hermione.

And Luna likes Ron - lordy. Sweet locker room scene.
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From margaritama on April 08, 2009
Holy shit....wow. GO HERMIONE! YEAH! I can't wait to see what she does when finds out it was Pansy who slipped her the potion.

I loved the tender scene with Draco at the infirmary. And Hot Nott not's so bad? Hmm. Well, Draco probably has few friends he trusts. Not all Sltherin's are asses...so thank you for giving us that insight. And I didn't miss Millie's nod. I'm sure Daphne was cheering, on the inside. LOL
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From kogaluver on April 08, 2009
I really love this story. I'm a yaoi writer and yaoi lover all the way, but Draco and 'Mionne are such an awesome couple that I make allowances, lol. They're my favorite het couple, my only favorite het couple ^_^. You've really kept the story moving with a lot of humor, angst and hot, sexy lemons. I can't wait for Pansey to get what's coming to her. Keep up the great work.
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From PixieStick on April 08, 2009
I really like this story but why is no one trying to figure out who sent Hermione the chocolats? Since Snape mentioned that the amount she consumed is leathal, shouldn't this be something kind of important that she would want to find out? And is there a reason why Draco can't just dump Pansy?
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From dragongirl on April 08, 2009
TY TY TY for kicking Pansy's ass it was about time. I laughed my head off... Love this independent and secure Hermione even with the potion... Please keep them coming ...
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From ANON - Anon on April 08, 2009
Hmm, Theo was almost civil to her even if he did give her a backhanded insult. And how intriguing that Draco's problems sleeping happened the same time as 'their' little incident. I think there's more to it than that but what Hermione witnessed certainly didn't help. I wonder if Madam Pomfrey kept her word and didn't tell Draco that Hermione had been in the hospital wing to check on him? And as for Pansy, although I don't like to condone violence as a rule either, I can't say she didn't get what was coming to her. I LOVED that Milliecent gave Hermione a look of gratitude too - very intriguing.

Next chapter - Madam Pomfrey was totally cool and I love that she has had a gutful of Pansy too even though she was a bit more civil about it. And has Pansy just told Draco what she did? Somehow I was expecting him to be a lot more pissed off than that. Loved the quidditch match, I was following the action as if I was right there int he stands with them - well done. I even cringed at the thought of Draco connecting with the stand. OUCH!! And OMG did Draco just give Harry a compliment???? LOL And Blaise really is a jerk in this story,(sigh). I better give him a good talking to. LMAO ;)

And I so get your point about Draco and Pansy now. I kinda (accidentally on purpose) forgot that she was his girlfried and technically Hermione was the 'other woman' so yeah, he is the more mature of the pair currently, he's telling it like it is whereas I think Hermione has yet to get to that stage or possibly still has her romantic rose coloured glasses still perched precariously on the end of her nose. It made a lot more sense in this chapter looking at it that way. :) And then, whew, the emotions playing out here, he says he knows she loves him and he's actually happy about it and they wander off like start struck lovers only to part the moment they get near any potential witnesses.......oh the intrigue.

And finally, I am just pissing myself laughing at the fact that Ron doesn't get why Luna sent him that letter. Oh please let Ginny explain it to him????? LMAO
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From ANON - Anon on April 07, 2009
I'm just going to pretend I'm an adult for a minute and scream out my frustation for the games Draco and Hermione are playing. ARRRRGGGGGGGGGH Okay, I'm over it now. LOL Draco was right when he said Hermione was doing the worng thing by using Ron and his feelings for her to get at him but isn't that the pot calling the cauldron black!!!!!! He's no better with the way he's treating Pansy. She may not be a nice girl in this story but no-one deserves to be used like that. And when Hermione walked in to the RoR and saw the two of them together, my heart broke with hers. I really do know what it's like to walk in and see something like that. The way that was written was gut wrenchingly devastating. Loved it!!! Can't wait for what's next. :)
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