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Reviews for Doves Cry

By : gldnlqr
  • From ANON - Sophia on April 03, 2009
    Wow, I really quite liked this. Short, but powerful. I do have to mention that you had a few spelling mistakes, but that didn't take away from the story. Interested to see more of you!

    Sophia~
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  • From ANON - KillingProphet on April 02, 2009
    I have never noticed that and I am a huge fan of Prince (I even own his movie on VHS no less) Probably because I never read the lyric books, if I had my OCD would have killed me.
    >.
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  • From KillingProphet on April 01, 2009
    I like it, although I rather dislike you using 2s and 'U's in the lyrics it made it very hard to keep the beat.
    Good job,
    KP
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  • From ANON - Pernilla on March 30, 2009
    Excellent story, although a few spelling and grammar mistakes. I'd love to beta for you, if you're still looking. :)

    Supergirl_pernilla@hotmail.com

    //P
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  • From ANON - SeverinaSnapius on March 30, 2009

    Glad to see you fixed those typos. Makes the story much more clear. I'm not a huge fan of songfics, but as Snarry is my favourite pairing, I had to have a look at this. There are still a few punctuation errors, but all in all it's a good effort.
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  • From ANON - SeverinaSnapius on March 29, 2009


    This is a little confusing---in your summary you say Harry relives his life with his lover over "thier" grave, which would lead one to believe Harry was also dead...only he's not. And then, the name on the gravestone....Sebastian Snape?? Unless I'm misunderstanding something here, shouldn't the name be Severus Snape?
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