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Reviews for Broken

By : Jesslynne
  • From ObsesiveReader on January 03, 2012
    love the story so far. I completely agree on the diliking of people rushing these kind of stories.
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  • From Gypsii on December 15, 2009
    LOVE IT! Such a sad plot, but an amazing story. Please, PLEASE UPDATE!
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  • From Darkless on April 01, 2009
    Ah, angst whore that I am, I believe I will beg you for more!
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  • From danawarner on March 31, 2009
    How could so much damage be caused in such a short amount of time?
    Harry was only at the Durleys for... what.. 6 weeks? Sure he was abused before, but now he's broken completely.
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  • From Makovaso on March 31, 2009
    good chapter, please update soon.
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  • From Hambares on March 31, 2009
    I like the slow approach! It works so much better then there, "wham-bam-your all fixed-let's hop in bed" approach!
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  • From padme82 on March 31, 2009
    I'm very glad to hear that you're not going to have Snape take on the role of Harry's new master. Your story is developing very slowly, and I mean that in the best possible way. No one likes a rushed romance.

    Excellent work, dear.

    -- snow
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  • From magentah on March 31, 2009
    Nice. You handle a difficult topic very well, and your writing is excellent. :)
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  • From Makovaso on March 30, 2009
    good chapter, please update soon.
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  • From padme82 on March 30, 2009
    Ah, poor Harry. You wrote his confusion about the situation in which he finds himself perfectly. And I'm so glad we're seeing noble!Snape in this story. There are so many stories where Snape 'allows' Harry to please him with the whole 'oh it's good for him to adjust himself to pleasure' idea in mind.

    With victims of abuse, it's never that easy. One of my favorite poor!Harry stories is Dark Angel by Eriador117. Harry isn't ready for a sexual relationship for a good while after the abuse, but he adjusts to being sexual again slowly. It's handled very well and realistically. I think you're doing a good job of this here. It wouldn't make sense for them to take up with each other so soon.

    Thanks for the update email. Keep me on your list, yeah?

    -- snow
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  • From Makovaso on March 29, 2009
    Good story, please update soon.
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  • From danawarner on March 29, 2009
    Wow. Poor Harry. I hope Sev can help.
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  • From Darkless on March 29, 2009
    Wow, very good start.

    Yes it's true that the plotline is one often used, but it's a great start. Each version takes on a different feel as it's guided by the differring points of view and imagination of the varied authors. Some, sad to say, are lacking in writing skills and don't do any story justice. So far, your skills show promise of a great story. It's facinating to watch a broken/abused Harry be administered to the snarky yet capable Snape, aaaaand if it ends in slashy goodness....that's all the better. I'd love to see how you lead your plot on.
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  • From soloflamelady on March 29, 2009
    this is a wonderful beginning can't wait to read more of this. The ride seems like it could be real fun and fraught with with angst just right up my alley.
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  • From MorganaWhite on March 29, 2009
    Very promising start! Please continue!
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