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Reviews for Her Shoes

By : margaritama
  • From smmz79 on April 22, 2009
    oh wow i am speechless... that was a great chap the intricateness of his manipulation was well thought out you did a great job.... i soooo love a possessive dominant draco i can not help it.... why do i feel like we will see jared again???? oh and draco has played with fire ok so he loves her but i think hermione will be able to set him straight give her sometime to deal with his 'confessions' and she will get back in the ballgame the ball has been in his court for too long it is time that he dances to her tune... :-) btw i love the dress and shoes very hot i love that you give us links to all of that it is fun!!!! can not wait to read the next chap oh and your beta work on T's fics is fab love her stories... this story and restless have become my new crack.... :-)
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  • From Scarybearhair on April 22, 2009
    Wow! I was not ready for this chapter. It was quite a shocker. I mean, I suspected something was going to go down because they were too happy. But this surprised me.

    First off, I wonder if Jared Montgomery is going to show up again. Obviously, he is Draco
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  • From andarte on April 21, 2009
    Loved chapter 12! I'm not sure who I sympathize with the most, but I eagerly await the next chapter. :)
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on April 21, 2009
    Wow! I was expecting the confession of having gotten rid of her boyfriends, and as Cecelia already mentioned him taking a loooonnnngggg time in his plans, I assumed that went back a ways, but the rest... Merlin! Her horror is so fully and completely justified. He doesn't even realize how much he did wrong, that poor confused, obsessed, aching man. I just keep going, "Wow...wow!" I have a feeling that while Hermione will take a long while to get past this, and Draco will have a lot of work to do to make her believe his love, the person that he should fear most is Pansy. Once she learns the full truth of his actions over the past years, and she realizes that she (inadvertently) helped him do this to her friend, she is going to lose it! And, I don't forsee Ginny or Narcissa giving him much peace either. Again, I say, "Wow!" I don't know who I feel more sorry for right now. lol Update again soon please. I can't wait to see the fallout. Thanks, hon! HG4eva
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  • From MegNutz on April 21, 2009
    oh holy fuck! excuse the language lol that was a lil unexpected! but good lol can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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  • From on April 21, 2009
    Alright, you got me. I had NO idea!!! I guess I can kind of see his side - but hello crazy!!! Well, I'm ready for the ride - I hope! Give us more!!!
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  • From tsorg on April 21, 2009
    This chapter was a biggie, you know for the life of me I know he's twisted but I feel bad for him.... he loves her, okay, in a twisted, dark kind of way but I don't think he's ever loved anyone before!

    Loved, loved, loved the shoes, they were hot and I like that Draco kneeled down to play with them a little!

    Also loved the little side trip to Greece, very nice touch Hon, it shows the passing of time so there is some time behind what they've been building together. A hot, sexy Draco in hot Greece with virtually no clothes, I'm soooo there.

    I also liked her exerting some dominance in the bedroom (or in this case the chaise) hot, little tryst!

    Excellent Chapter Margarita!
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  • From rainieg1 on April 21, 2009
    Did not see that coming at all. Hermione has every right to be angry. I was angry for her. But on that note Draco is still yummy.Tank you for this.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on April 21, 2009
    Even though I knew this was coming, when Draco said all of that, it really hit home how obsessed he's been. It's creepy as hell...and yeah, if I were Hermione I would have freaked out as well. I love my Draco dark, so if they get back together, I won't have any problems with it, but I know if this was real life, that fucker would have a restraining order on him within a day. lol. Oh, I LOVE LOVE these shoes. Not sure I'd be bold enough to wear that dress, but it's HOT : ) Oh, and Draco's handling of that jerk at the party was awesome, and he was so close to telling her he loved her without any pressure when dude interrupted. Stomps in frustration. I'm very interested in how you're gonna work this out, but I have faith, love will save the day...that and some hot ass sex. lol. Great update, Margarita : )
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  • From scarletwitchextreme on April 21, 2009
    holy fuck shit omg that was one hell of a cliffy the last chapter OMG OMG u are on a roll the story rules and oh lord the shoes especially the last pair...sigh update soon
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  • From trixiedust on April 21, 2009
    Yes, he came clean more than once, didn't he?

    Good chapter, interesting twists. He messed up.
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  • From blondpierogi on April 21, 2009
    oooh OMG!!! what a loaded chapter!! he finally came clean to Hermione, wow what a sneaky bastard. But he did all that so that he could have her. Well i love this story and i cannot wait to read about what happens next. will she forgive him? will they ever get back together? or will they get back together and are all lovied up couple? Kudos!!!
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  • From dragongirl on April 21, 2009
    This is a major step back outch.... pls... update soon I am dying here...LOL
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  • From Fiendfyre on April 20, 2009
    I reallllly love your story and I can't wait to see what else happens. It's very well written.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on April 20, 2009
    Pansy and Ginny are awesome friends...can't wait to see if Hermione takes the plunge first. Draco is hinting at it, but not saying it...I love that. Oh, I love their tense arguments and play. Whatever Draco wants, he gets...HOTNESS....I like that she's not a doormat, she puts up a little fight, and then caves, like any hot blooded woman with a hot ass dominant male would do. : ) They're really of like mind and yet you give them a nice tension. Happy sigh. I love the WWN idea, brilliant. A really fun and clever plot with the right kind of smut makes for good dreams. Thanks for that. Now these shoes are bold...not sure I can hang, but I love that dress. More please : )
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