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Reviews for Her Shoes

By : margaritama
  • From on April 19, 2009
    I really like this story!! To be honest I started reading it cause all my other ones I follow haven't updated but damn I'm hooked!!! Yuo got hook, line, and sinker!!! Can't wait for the next update!
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  • From ichiruki on April 19, 2009
    @ Chapter 1, interesting! I like how's its already a done deal and he's just watching her this whole time put on a show, pervvy little bastard! lol!
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  • From marieve on April 18, 2009
    Absolutly delightful story!! I'm loving this..you clearly have a thing for shoes ;) very nice ones to be precise..and clothes..god every outfit (and shoes) that Hermione wears I can picture it perfectly in my head. I adore this story!! I was alittle bit mad at Draco for just leaving Hermione out in the blue like that when they first fooled around...but now..well all is forgiven lol The interactions that Draco and Hermione have are mind blowing. Simply put, I love how you write! I can't wait for you to post the next chapter, I really can't wait for what those two are going to be doing on their week off. By the way genius way for the WWP..really clever. And, it's believable too, how long did that take you to think that up? Anyways, I'm loving the plot too, something with Cecilia is driving me crazy cause she clearly knows much more than she's letting on, so does Pansy..maybe not Ginny as much but they're definatly thick as thieves on what's going on with Hermione. I can't wait to find out! Anyways, keep it up! I'm hoping that alot of people review your story, because you're doing an awesome job! Not alot of people understand the amount of time and effort it takes to create GOOD, long chapters, so keep it up!!:D
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  • From POOHBEAR74 on April 18, 2009
    Love this story and Moine's outfits and shoes!

    ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER!
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  • From smmz79 on April 18, 2009
    yeah loved the chap Draco really is very sexy when he is all possessive and dominating.... loved the chap and i LOVED the shoes and dress was hot.... hmm so hermione went and talked to pansy and ginny about her feelings for draco i am sure that they know more then they are letting on about... so they should have an interesting week loads of time for her to quiz him about his past behavior but he keeps saying that the time is not right so what is he waiting for i wonder hmm.... can not wait for the next chap but do not worry a story this good is worth the wait....
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 18, 2009
    I love a Hermione so motivated by her work and concentrating on what she should be doing to the point of being annoyed at/by Draco for his naughty little interruptions. LOL I was annoyed by his self righteousness but you explained it beautifully further on so I can see where you're coming from on that angle. Besides, I don't think Hermione was really complaining at the time and he did apologise afterwards. :)

    And oh dear, whatever are they going to do with the rest of the week off? LMAO ;)

    Don't know if this will help, (if you're not already using it) but perhaps Harry Potter Wikia might be able to give you a few answers if you need them. harrypotter.wikia.com

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  • From Scarybearhair on April 18, 2009
    Chapter 11

    Those are such cool shoes! In fact, I think those are my favorite. If only I could wear heels. I honestly shouldn
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  • From tsorg on April 17, 2009
    Talk about a kick ass outfit and shoes!!!! Good golly if I went into a meeting wearing that I would leave no survivors! I'm so glad Draco gave Hermione credit where credit was due! She cracked phase one so they could move onto phase 2, she's such a smart witch!

    Okay, I don't think Hermione was serious saying he couldn't touch her! I think she said it more in irritation because he wouldn't leave her in peace. Then he totally goes off the handle! AND I don't think he went off the handle cause some other witch used and abused him, there is definitely something more there. She handled him very, very well, and I'm very pleased she made sure they talked about it! He soooo should be apologizing to her.

    Hot chapter Honey!
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  • From tsorg on April 17, 2009
    I so loved that they walked in the rain together through a gorgeous garden underneath an oversized umbrella, tres romantic! I'm such a sucker for the romantic! Hermione has such a good relationship with Cecilia, it's almost as if Cecilia has become her defacto mum which is very sweet! Loved the picture of the Wellies! Hermione's sounded lovely.

    I need a toe curling kiss in the rain! Send him over my way babe!

    Wonderfully done!
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  • From on April 17, 2009
    MARGARITAMA!!!

    Finally I've been able to review! Well you already know how much I love this fic. Your dominant Draco is so swoon worthy. *melts*

    Awesome update babe. I'm so looking forward to your next installment. =]
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  • From 13Secrets on April 17, 2009
    I'm still loving this story but... What the FRICK?! She can't use sex or her body to manipulate him, but he can use her own body against her? He's the MAN in this relationship? I am way too feminist for this. He definitely needs a talking to if he thinks that's okay to say/do. Sometimes I wish I could just rewrite parts in fics like this. I would have her tell him "No!" flat out after he said that load of crap about being "the man". She'd leave quickly and send him post after calming down a bit.

    Submissive Hermione makes me want to slap her in the face.

    Ya, I'm blunt. Ask Soft about it!

    Still, terribly well written!

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  • From jubilant on April 17, 2009
    I love this story so much! Draco is so hot with his tough guy persona. Keep going!!
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  • From dragongirl on April 17, 2009
    This is just so good.. I can get enough of it.. So please update soon..
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  • From smmz79 on April 17, 2009
    oh wow what a fabulous chap.... you have written draco sooo well you have made this charactor a person a real person besides what we see in jkr's books you have made him so much deeper and have given him meaning... i think i have fallen in love with draco myself.. i think that hermione has loved draco at least a little bit because although he was confusing to her she still had this uncontrollable urge to be with him and a draw to him... i love that they were able to learn about each other although it seems that hermione learned more than draco did since he is so closed off around others.... what a fabulous relationship you have written i am so excited even more to learn dracos secrets... you are a genious my dear as is your lovely beta!!!! ohhh i did that quiz on your sight where you put your name in and you age it gives you the harry potter character the how and where i got Tom Felton in bed naked!!! wooo hooo
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  • From Scarybearhair on April 17, 2009
    Chapter 10

    Squee! Aw Margarita, you are a doll!
    I am so honored to have such a beautiful chapter dedicated to me. Thank you sweetie!

    This chapter was like a wild, beautiful and whirlwind romance. Hermione
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