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By : margaritama
  • From caseyjarryn on April 15, 2009
    I believe they are both rather besotted!! :o)
    great chapter! I do so love this story!
    thank you for the regular updates!
    Casey
    xoxo
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on April 15, 2009
    Hon, that was quite simply lovely. Utterly and completely perfect. I actually sighed out loud at the end. Beautiful. Congratulations to you! HG4eva
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on April 15, 2009
    OMG!! Guh!!! I did not see that coming, not the way you did it..that was fucking fantastic! Keep on doing that, please! I love Draco warding his bedroom, what an intense scene that was. Love how you are keeping the UST going despite them still getting their rocks off. lol. Nice dress, nice Mary Janes...makes me wanna go shopping. Where do they go from here? I can't wait to see. You're doing a fab job, loving this : )
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  • From Scarybearhair on April 15, 2009
    Chapter 9

    I absolutely adored this chapter! Wow!

    You always do the unexpected. I would have thought Draco and Hermione would have had it out on Monday, but you gave us a surprise by having Draco hide out. LOL

    I had to laugh when Hermione went and laid on Draco
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  • From LolaDiBlack on April 14, 2009
    AWESOME!!! I enjoyed this chapter very much, we can deny those two have a damn good chemestry, they fight, they fuck and they love like no other hahaha really I think J.K. made a mistake pairing her with Ron but aside that awesome detail, I really love the detail of everything, Chapter 8 I really loved Adrian muttering he was going to get killed but he didn't care and well this one hahahha I wasn't left unsatisfied. great work, now take care, UPDATE SOON!

    Love
    Lola
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  • From RyGirl824 on April 14, 2009
    I just LOVED the Dolce & Gabbana pumps from chapter 3! And those boots! The Sigerson Morrison Huarache Boots... TO DIE FOR! *sigh*
    Oh, this story is great... Though I do wonder what Draco is planning, and What Cecelia has to do with it.. Hmm, can't wait for more!
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  • From smmz79 on April 14, 2009
    OMG OMG OMG yeahhhh that was a great chap and full of soooo much.... i love hermiones determination in this although she does seem to melt when draco becomes all dominant oh but who wouldn't that was very hot ok so obviously this was all planned but i am still wondering what was so big that he had to put pansy under an unbreakabloe vow.... the scene against the door was so freaking hot i love absolutely love how you have written draco... i can not wait to read the next chap to see what he says is the reasoning i am sooo excited that we get to find out everything.... i loved hermione snooping i so would have i mean she needed to learn more about him because at first she thought he hated her but after the last chap with the girls she had realized it was more and of course she was going to try to figure it out...... he is obvious around her!!!! i loved this chap and absolutely cannot wait for the next... oh and the shoes were hot!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 14, 2009
    Wouldn't that just piss you off? There she is all ready to face Draco and give him a taste of his own medicine and the buggar isn't even there. How bloody frustrating? And LMAO - she must have thought she was on another planet when Narcissa came to ask her to tea and went out of her way to make Hermione feel comfortable. Whatever has Cecelia and for that matter, Draco been saying to her for Narcissa to act this way? Oh and I can't wait to find out Lucius' opinion too.

    LOL Having her snoop around in Draco's room. Not always a good idea, whe might have found more than she bargained for but oh, OH, OH the punishment Draco had in mind when he returned and told her she'd been a bad girl for snooping. Le sigh!

    The vamp of the shoe? That sounds like stylist lingo - I'm convinced you work in the fashion industry. LMAO Regardless, you're doing an excellent job with the shoes and clothes and adding such a unique twist to your story. :)
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  • From Irishangel2 on April 14, 2009
    Oh My God...... I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    This has to be one a my fave storys at the moment!!!! Well done!!! Thanks for the picture links.... they are great!! And hubby loved the Agent Provocateur site!!!!!! Lo0oking foward to the next update!!!!!


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  • From elibdally on April 14, 2009
    That was one hot chapter. Please update!
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  • From tsorg on April 13, 2009
    Chapter 9:

    Your writing is wonderful, do you know that is exactly how I pictured the dress before I saw the actually link, you described so well in the chapter. I can totally understand why it would make her feel ultra feminine!

    The tea with Narcissa Malfoy was sweet, I can't blame Hermione for being on guard but to know she somehow is going to end up going shopping with Narcissa tickles me, I'd love to have you describe that chapter!

    Now, to the hot, smutty goodness.....OMG, he spanked her then took her up against a god damn door. OMG! I needed a cold shower after reading this chapter and then he picks her up and carries her into the bedroom!!!! AGGGGGGGGG! I think Chapter 10 is gonna be a doozy!
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  • From tsorg on April 13, 2009
    You are tooo much, calling me out in your chapter! I'm honored to be Hermione's favorite erotic romance writer at the moment and inciting lustful thoughts in her! SQUEEEEEEEEE! You of course realize you are now fair game to be pulled into a story of mine, hmmmmm, who to pair you up with girly girl!?!

    This was a wonderful chapter, love the girl night, I need to be diligent about instituting girl night at least once a month! So Pansy and Ginny are trying to pair her up. It's pretty telling that both of them think Draco is a good match for her. Though I can't blame her for being miffed at them, though she should know better they aren't trying to make a fool out of her, more especially if a wizard's oath was taken...sheesh. Are you going to make Pansy and Ginny buy Hermione a new pair of shoes? I think they owe her that for sure!

    Lovely, sweet chapter!
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  • From tsorg on April 13, 2009
    Chapter 7:

    Love, love, love that you put the link in for her dress! It helps paint the overall picture and I get a better idea of what Hermione looks like and just the thought she puts into her outfits! You need to go shopping with me margaritama, I need a fashionista guru!

    Hermione is taking no guff from Mr. Ferret, she sure told him and cause they were at a very public party he couldn't do diddlysquat, HA, Draco, so take that!

    Adrian looks pretty dreamy, damn that French actor is smoking! I need to do a search on him and see what else he's been in....

    Poor Hermione she's putting on a great front!


    Awesome chapter!
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  • From tsorg on April 13, 2009
    Chapter 6

    I'm behind on my reviewing!!!! This chapter was inspiring to me so much so that I had to go add smut to my Chapter 6. Damn girl, your Draco is so damn HAWT!!!!! I want him! Except when he acted like the perfect prick and told her Adrian was waiting for her. He couldn't seem to hold back his jealousy! Even after she told him she wore that outfit and boots for him, I mean come on....how dense can he be? Men.....sheesh!

    You inspire me!
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  • From smmz79 on April 13, 2009
    yeah i love this story... ok so pansy and ginny knew more then they were letting on about that makes sense but could be so big that he would make them take an unbreakable vow so they would not tell i mean if he just liked her that wouldn't require something that serious... and i love the part about hermione enjoy her romance novels by T Stevenson LOVE LOVE LOVE your betas woek as well!!!! you both are fantastic... ok so on to the draco situation i am still so lost as to why he would be so harsh with her if he likes her that could push her away???? hmmm well he just got hermione all riled up so he is in for it now great job i am on to the next chap
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