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Reviews for Her Shoes

By : margaritama
  • From on April 08, 2009
    So, the portraits know her... is this a creature fic, or is Draco just seriously obsessed? It's obvious he's interested, so why hurt her with his words?
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  • From on April 08, 2009
    This is a great story! I love all the fashion references - I feel like I'm there & seeing the shoes/clothes. Naughty Hermione thinking about her boss that way!
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  • From Baybeetricia on April 08, 2009
    OMG!

    I love how this story is progressing; and it's only the first chapter.

    But, seriously, what I really, really, want to comment on is her shoes....OMG, OMG, OMG!

    They are GORGEOUS!!!!

    I'll be honest, I'm not a fan of heels that high, since I am rather tall myself, and silver in color, but that shoe is hard not to fall in love with. And the golden flowers...or what looks like a flower, is sooo gorgeous I couldn't help but stare at them for what seem like hours..(which was only twenty-five seconds or so).

    -sighs-

    Time for the other chapter....

    Baybeetricia
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  • From boicrazygirl15 on April 08, 2009
    I love your story, keep it coming. :D I especially love how draco is so effected by the men in hermiones life. Gives me shivers lol.
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  • From Hessa on April 08, 2009
    god, the part when she's watching him undo his tie and cufflinks...I've always found that a man undoing his tie is so bloody sexy!

    Great chapter! Always the cold bastard eh? Am anxious to read about his motivations and how Hermione will cope with working with him after this!

    love it!
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  • From Scarybearhair on April 08, 2009
    Chapter 6

    OMG! This chapter was so frickin
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  • From Scarybearhair on April 07, 2009
    Chapter 5

    This was another excellent chapter hon! I just love all these extra tidbits you add and the relationship Hermione has with her friends.

    So Hermione and Adrian are just friends, eh? I was hoping that Adrian wanted a little bit more so he would be competition for Draco. Yet I understand if you don
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  • From mhaj78 on April 07, 2009
    AHHHHH...why did he do that? Afraid of getting too close? A wonderfully written chapter, thanks for a fantastic update!
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  • From Snakekat on April 07, 2009
    Once again another great chapter, looking forward to part 3.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on April 07, 2009
    @Ch. 5. Those boots are badass! And thank god for Cecilia! Now I know Draco is up to something....sexyass conniver : ) Hermione should have a few ideas, but she's probably in denial huh? Great chapter.
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  • From 13Secrets on April 07, 2009
    Oh, I do love this story!

    I have a feeling that the portraits know something huge that could change everything for Hermione... I also like how... possessive and powerful your Draco is, so Slytherin and sexily firm handed. I don't mind the femininity of Hermione, and how fragile she seems to be despite her strong-mindedness. I was surprised at that.

    What Draco did to her, and then what he did afterwards in C.6 was terrible, but very appropriate. I actually almost expected it, in some way or another. For him to put his guards back up, after using her is just so... Malfoy of him. She shouldn't be surprised. And I believe that he did it to get information out of her, to show her her place in his life and his home. To me, at this point, she is just a toy to him. A very hot, necessary toy.

    And the smut! The thinking about sex... The "consequences" of thinking about sex... (With Draco...). This is anticipation I am happy to experience!

    I am loving your shoes idea. This is something that will carry your story along quite soundly, and represent each chapter (or day) of her life in this fic. I love how it seems as if she has an infinite amount of shoes that she only wears once. And I'm awaiting the chapter when she wears those "special delivery" shoes!

    Keep it coming! I love your timing, and I love your update schedule.

    Oy, something else. I think it would be nice to have the link to the shoes at the beginning of each chapter. I've imagined these shoes, sometimes, and finished the chapter only to look at the picture in the link and be terribly mistaken. I think showing the shoes early on, although it would somewhat defeat the purpose of describing them, would aid in setting the mood for the chapter.

    Just a thought!

    --
    13
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  • From LolaDiBlack on April 07, 2009
    Oh My Oh My Oh My!!!

    I started to read this but didn't even notice who was writing it, until last night... and I am so ashamed for not reviewing earlier to you my most faithful reader and reviewer....

    I love your work and the detail of every shoe (even if sometimes I get lost with the descriptions) I also love Cecillia and I'm a little in between love and loath with Draco, poor Hermione always ends up fucked up in the situation.... Oh well I must say good bye now but I trully hope to read you soon.... take care


    Love
    Lola
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  • From elibdally on April 07, 2009
    Yummy story. Update soon!
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  • From Eilisbelle on April 07, 2009
    *hawt chapter* very very very hawt, and heartbreaking at the end..... Does Draco make it up to her??
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  • From AydenDenise on April 07, 2009
    Well he just fucked up that big time. Nice going.
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