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Reviews for Her Shoes

By : margaritama

From caseyjarryn on April 03, 2009
great job so far!!... love all the gorgeous clothes!...I want her wardrobe!
update soon.
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From HarryGinny4eva on April 03, 2009
Good gracious! Poor Hermione is simply losing all control isn't she? LMAO I do wonder if he knows Occlumency, because she hasn't been trerribly guarded with her thoughts. lol Loving it!! Please continue. I promise a longer review next time, but I have to get to bed, as I have an early hair appointment. :-) Hugs, hon!

HG4eva
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From mhaj78 on April 03, 2009
is the movie line from In Her Shoes w/Camerin Diaz:

Blushing madly she replied,
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From ANON - Anon on April 03, 2009
That was just the best chapter - all that tension just waiting to explode - loved it. LOL I wonder what the Malfoys have been saying to their ancestors for the portraits to be so cordial of Hermione? And I wonder why Adrian suddenly cancelled their lunch date? (laughs knowingly) And finally, what a 'coincidence' that her 'weapon of choice' is silver just like Draco's eyes. LMAO

The shoes are gorgeous but I don't think I'd be game to try and walk in them, far too high for me. :) Once again, I love how you're detailing their clothes, it helps put the perfect picture in my head. :)
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From POOHBEAR74 on April 03, 2009
I hope she gets her man!

Great story!
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From distinctlyME on April 03, 2009
I'm such a shoe freak. I'm soooo bad!!! e-bay is my godsend! So I went online to find some of the Christian Louboutin shoes that both my Best friend and I own.

I don't know if you have all the shoes planned out, but just in case you need some inspiration!! ;)

http://hrfashion.com/wp-content/uploads/2008/07/graysuedechristianlouboutin.jpg

http://pumpsandgloss.com/wp-content/uploads/2008/02/christian-louboutin-lace-up-oxford1.jpg

http://i3.iofferphoto.com/img/wantad/458/091/christianlouboutindecolletecamel2.jpg

http://images.teamsugar.com/files/users/0/3987/30_2007/index-1.preview.jpg

http://assnkicks.files.wordpress.com/2007/10/christian-louboutin-patent-peep-toe-mary-janes.jpg

http://www.iheartluxe.com/wp-content/uploads/2007/07/christian-louboutin.jpg

I'm loving this story btw!!

Much love & respect
dM

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From LadyBlueEyes on April 03, 2009
What an exciting story!! I love a sexy confident Draco!! He's just so yummy. The UST in this story is strong from the very beginning, and each chapter so far has left me on edge for more, and wondering when something will happen beween them.

I've no doubt that Draco said something to Pucey, and will continue to interrupt, or interfere in Hermione's plans.

Now about the shoes....I love them all! I think you have an original idea here, each chapter title is a shoe, and Draco consistently tells her that she has 'nice shoes' I cannot wait to see where and when she will use the "come fuck me now" shoes!!

Brilliantly done and looking forward to more!!!

Hugs...
Lady B*
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From dragongirl on April 03, 2009
He needs to make a move please..... Keep them coming LOL
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From smmz79 on April 03, 2009
omg that was a great chap... loved it and the shoes are hot.... ok so what in the heck is going on... hmmmm pucey cancelling smells awful fishy.... i was thinking about this fic yest after i read chap three and something hit me that i did not comment on and it was the comments from the portraits.... something about him being lucky and stuff and now in this chap she actually speaks a little bit with dracos great great great? grandmother and she was real close to finding things out and i loved that cecilia totally covered for her obviously this is something draco does not want her to know.... and what in the world is up with his emotions i mean really i 'think' that he is dealing with his feelings for her and what was that part when they were calling each other names and she called him a beast and he says you have no idea what was that was it a hint???? he got a little intense when hermione mentioned todd that was interesting i wonder what is going to happen next and i can not wait for the 'come fuck me shoes' to make an appearrance great job i love this chap and this story i totally forgot about the movie quote i am going to go back and look for it i doubt i will get it but please tell us what it was... :-)
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From tsorg on April 03, 2009
Chapter Four:

Ooooooh, Honey, love the additions you made in the chapter! Very nice touches!

Hermione's control seems to be slipping somewhat, though she is desperately trying to continue her professionalism, Draco seems to have the ability to make her lose the ability to know what end is up!

Loved the portrait dialogue, what must be going through Hermione's head to find out that the senior Malfoys are discussing her and that Draco is tight-lipped. Where the heck was he when she came to the manor? Was he that upset that she made her way from the sitting room to his suite of rooms on her own? Obviously he does not want her talking to his grandmere!

Forceful bastard isn't he, when he wants something from her, he surely doesn't mince words and she can't help but obey him. I wonder if he's clued in yet that when he uses a particular tone of voice with her, the girl is pure putty in his hands. I wonder if Hermione realizes it!?!

I loved that you had her open up when he got her on the topic of shoes and he was sitting back with bemusement, I'm sure wondering if he is now seeing glimpses of what Hermione is really like!

Ohhhh, her sexual tension is delicious! I can just see her desire build up over the afternoon so that she's practically frantic by the time she gets home.... thank goodness for toys that can help alliviate certain anxieties....
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From tsorg on April 03, 2009
Chapter Three:

I like how she handles her trepidation by arming herself with a kick ass outfit and shoes, it's like her armour and shield as she prepares to go into battle!

Man, your Draco sounds hot, especially with the shirt unbuttoned enough to "flash manly flesh" I like a man in business attire just a little undone, the buttons undone was a very sexy touch!

He is just a mass of contradictions isn't he?! On one hand he's sensitive to the fact that she was nervous about seeing where she had been tortured and he immediatly let her know the rooms had been remodeled, maybe it was a terrible experience for him as well. Then just as quickly he turns around and is such a prick! A moody man!

Love the portrait gallery, I don't think they follow Draco's orders very well!

Uh oh, I wonder if Draco knows what kind of affect his voice has on her because when he uses it just so, the girl just can't help but comply to what he asks of her!

I like that he notices her shoes, very nice touch!

Great dialogue creates a lovely, sexual tension between the two!
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From tsorg on April 03, 2009
Ahhh, lovely scene of Hermione, Ginny and Pansy shopping together. Love that Hermione is the resident fashion expert, the friend you call to help you put together the perfect ensemble! I need one of those, can you send her my way?! I also love the tag teaming of Pansy and Ginny when they are encouraging Hermione to sit down and talk with Draco so they can have a better working relationship. And, aren't they dropping all kinds of questions in her head as to why she should talk to Draco with the "Draco is muggle this and muggle that...."

I'm so glad I don't have a Todd in my life! The man is evil, he's like a drug dealer and shoes are like a drug to Hermione. He knows what she likes and just happens to have ordered shoes in her size knowing she'll buy them! Good thing the girl makes a high salary!

Be still my heart, a dirty talking Draco, even though he was imaginary I could visualize him too, please send him over to me! Good lord, it's gotten hot in here.

Lovely chapter!
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From on April 03, 2009
Is Draco a Veela? He's acting awfully veela~ish
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From tsorg on April 03, 2009
Chapter One:

I adore that you have Hermione as a confident, in control, woman on a mission. She's secure in how she presents herself and loves to look good because it gives her that added boost of confidence!

The girl's night out was great, yes, those nights always seem to start out innocently enough and then someone has to bring out the hard stuff. In my case it's tequila shots, what I wouldn't give for some of that hang-over potion when I've lost whatever sense I had!

Love, love, love the snarky Draco, why is he so damn attractive when he is an absolute prick? Silent intimidation, this is a man who clearly knows how to exert control in very subtle ways.

Then calling her a dirty girl, love the fact that you have her secret, little passion being the sound of his voice. She probably thought she'd faint dead away when he purred to her she was a dirty girl.....squeeeee!

Awesome job, Toots!
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From Coipje on April 02, 2009
please continue and I just adore those shoes man !!
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