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Reviews for Her Shoes

By : margaritama
  • From bananasforyou on April 01, 2009
    excellent!!!!
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on April 01, 2009
    Well, heck! I want one, too. I can't wait to see what he has in store for her on Monday. lol The smartest witch of the age, my tushy. He dates every kind of woman, he dabbles in all things muggle, he DEMANDS her and only her on the project, he's never brought a witch home to his parents but the work MUST be done there, and he has become friendly to every person on the planet but her....Oh, Hermione, THINK! lol I am really enjoying her hate him/lust after him dilemma. I also like Ginny and Pansy, so far. Thanks! I look forward to more soon. HG4eva
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 01, 2009
    I'm so thrilled you've decided to write a story. Now I can finally give you a proper thank you for the times you've given me such lovely reviews by doing the same for you. :)

    Love the idea of a go getter Hermione who likes the way she looks and is into fashion and what makes her look good too. But you also showed the vulnerability underneath it all that shows that she still feels she's just not good enough - no thanks to Draco. I love the way he manipulated his way into getting her to head the deal, you just know he has a plan for her in all of this and I can't wait to see what it is.

    I'm not game to look at your shoe pictures, I'm afraid I'll fall in love with them all too - if the descriptions in the story are anything to go by, I'm already halfway there. LMAO. Looking forward to more. :)

    Knowing that we're both fans of Blaise, I'm hoping he makes an appearance too. ;)
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  • From trixiedust on April 01, 2009
    Oh I like the first chappy, nice start, has depth and good character definition.
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  • From 13Secrets on April 01, 2009
    AHHH! Wonderful story, great imagery, and your descriptions are superb. Expressing your brand of Hermione through shoes is pretty sweet, and very effective.

    I plan on following this story to completion!

    Also, did you write much before this fic? I wasn't sure, but I remember when I got into writing fanfiction and putting it online I had lots of encouragement. Especially from ilke, who suggested I do it and follows my stuff :). I trust you will have this same sort of base and support. Really, you have t_stevenson, soft, scary, and WILDCAT backing you up! This is going to be a great one!

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  • From RynStar15 on April 01, 2009
    Who know my margaritama was a shoe freak? I LOVE it! Lol. And I love the sexy Draco you've made and our poor sexually repressed Hermione, I hope you'll relieve her soon....*sigh*. He is so freaking SEXY!
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  • From dragongirl on April 01, 2009
    Hot, Sassy and well writen.. hey keep them coming and quick this is goood LOL
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  • From smmz79 on April 01, 2009
    whata great second chap... i love this story already... i like the friendships that you have developed in this fic... so i am thinking that ginny and pansy saw more in hermiones rant then she probably wanted them too.... I absolutely adore the titles of the chaps... i can not wait to read more and i am very interested in reading more on why draco treats hermione the way that he does it sounds like he wants to get a rise out of her esp after she started cussing him out in the first chap and he made the comment about the real granger... great job i am excited for more
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  • From AydenDenise on April 01, 2009
    Dear lord! Omg chick! This story is awesome. Told you I would read and review, I love Draco...and even if I'm not as much as a heel whore as you...I really really like the shoes. Great work darling. Can't wait to read more. love ya!

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  • From smmz79 on April 01, 2009
    oh wow what a fantastic first chap i just love the interaction between draco and hermione i find it interesting that draco seems to not be able to stand hermione i wonder why that is i am assuming that it has something to do with him liking her more than he wants to i am sure, being as she topped him in school so much.... i like that you have her interested in him and i love the way that she describes him, the way that you wrote that part was fab i was able to see him through her eyes, not that i ain't addicted to dm/hg.... oh and my fave part of this fic is her infatuation with shoes, i love shoes as well... i am glad that he noticed her heels... great fic i love that he went above her head and spoke to her boss about her spearheading the program, that had to piss her off.... they are going to work very close together and in an intimate situation that reinforces my thought that he feels more for hermione than loathing
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  • From RynStar15 on April 01, 2009
    Ow ow ;). Sounds sexy, hope you back it up! Update for me and I'll update for you.
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  • From Scarybearhair on April 01, 2009
    Chapter 1

    I know I have already told you, but I think this story starts out so fun! You
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on March 31, 2009
    Nice start! I look forward to seeing where this goes and how fast. ha ha ha Seems to me both are already ready. snicker..

    Thanks, hon and please update soon! HG4eva
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  • From mhaj78 on March 31, 2009
    OMG this is BRILLIANT!!! I can completely picture Hermione, from ponytail to Louboutins. And I positively GRINNED when Draco called her out for being a dirty girl, asking if she kisses her mother with that mouth. I for one can't wait to find out just how heavy-handed he CAN be! Excellent chapter--well done! Thanks for creating such a clear picture of the setting and writing a chapter that just sucked me in!
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on March 31, 2009
    Excellent beginning, you even sold me on the fact that Hermione would be wearing stilettos. She always does anything put before her at 150%. Draco is at his usual devilish best, I can't wait to see what he has up his sleeves and why he's requested that she be the one to head the project. Oh, and him staring her down during the presentation, hot! Him calling her a dirty girl. Really hot!! I can't see where you take this. Update soon!
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