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Reviews for Wishmaster

By : Gelta
  • From saeadame on April 07, 2009
    This seems like a very unique story =). I guess my only complaint is the number of errors... It's generally expected that a fic will have a few, but this one unfortunately moves out of the realm of "a few" and into "the errors are distracting me from the story".

    I guess my suggestion is please get a Beta XD;.

    Other then that, however, this seems like a really interesting fic, and I can't wait to see where it goes.

    (BTW: I'd be willing to beta for you - elliot[dot]tedra[at]gmail[dot]com - resolve the [dots] and [at] into . and @
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  • From SunnyKat on April 06, 2009
    w00t!! so exciting!! I think you should keep it this length because you post so often, and that's a good thing ;) another great chapie! Loved the portraits btw
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  • From Selera on April 06, 2009
    i'm fine with the fic the way you are putting it up. I say keep it the way it is.
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  • From Tesgura on April 06, 2009
    I love it! Nice set up with Harry saying 'I'll join you... not!' loved it! Where did he go though?

    BTW, if you need a beta, let me know.
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  • From SunnyKat on April 05, 2009
    OMG please keep updateing it is so exciting! I love how you use the book so much. the details are spot on! i'm currently dying with OMG-ness!!! w00t!!! =^.^=
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  • From Selera on April 05, 2009
    Now this story is starting to get really good. looking forward to more.
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  • From Seacilin on April 05, 2009
    I'd read on to see where this is going. Nice writing style.
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  • From KagetsuAsame on April 05, 2009
    Interesting, keep up the good work.
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  • From fadingstar on April 05, 2009
    Hi again ^^
    Still a couple of errors, mainly to do with punctuation, such as using a comma/period before the ending quotation. A couple of spelling errors, but once again, nothing too noticeable. I liked the characterization of Voldemort and Harry lol Voldie is his usual creepy and maniac self while Harry still the courageous gryffindor :P You actually had my heart racing during the chase :D
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  • From Selera on April 05, 2009
    Why thank you. I'm still enjoying this story though. I almost think the chaos of it adds something. i look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From Selera on April 04, 2009
    This chapter is a bit confusing to me... I had to read it twice but then I look at it again and realize it should be that way. after all you are trying to show Harry's thoughts and well thoughts are not always straight forward. I am looking forward to the next chapter just to see the insanity that will happen between the two.
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  • From fadingstar on April 04, 2009
    nice start :o Several spelling errors that you can fix with spell check, for example, "white" instead of "wight". Not a big deal but it might be distracting to some readers. Otherwise, I like it. I'm really curious as to what Voldemort is going to be up to :o
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