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Reviews for A Mate to Two Werewolves

By : Dreamer27
  • From NyaleIshamba on May 14, 2009
    ooh good chapter..can't wait for the next
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  • From EternalUniverse on May 07, 2009
    Update please ^_^
    Maybe its my own sick and twisted mind but i like the way this is going. I wonder how long it will take for Harry to get used to Draco, Fenrir and his two twin cubs. Sort of sad that he dissed them, but its understandable. I hope everything turns out ok in the end.
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  • From alma on April 23, 2009
    They only have themselves to blame. Good chapter.
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  • From RavenclawSamurai on April 22, 2009
    Interesting. I like the idea of family and having cute little cubs sound great. Poor Harry being treated so badly but I hope his pain won't last too long especially with his little cub by his side. Draco and Greyback better get their act together! I wouldn't want to be near them either.
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  • From Juled on April 21, 2009
    They want Harry to feel more like part of the pack? Maybe they should stop referring to him as 'the submissive' and stop treating him like breeding stock. That might be a good start.
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  • From Lucifoy on April 21, 2009
    i like tthis fic, although it nedds a lil bit more general description like in the narrating, it is very good, i like the plot, but i dont like when you uupdate the appearnce of the characters like chapters, its kinda like.. "wow a new chapter..oww.. not really guhh" they
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  • From Dreamwind on April 20, 2009
    I think this is a good story and it is getting better as it goes along. I would love to see longer chapters and less sudden shifts in POV. It makes it harder to focus on the story when I have to suddenly remember that I'm switching from 3rd perseon POV to Harry's POV. I think a little more work and this will be a killer story. I already feel so bad for poor Harry and want to see Draco and Fenrir suffer.
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  • From Aalto on April 20, 2009
    Would it really kill you to put the pup discriptions to the end of the chapter instead of making them a so called 'chapter' of their own...?
    Also, you should try to add more detail to things, like what the ceremony was like, how Harry fought to keep his pup, how the others got the pup away from him in the first place... Fenrirs and Dracos reactions, both mental and physical (meaning faceial expressions and body posture) when Harry started rubbing on them...
    And their injuries, Harry must have caused at least some when they had to subdue him! He is a werewolf after all...!

    This is all meant as friendly critic, not to put you down, if you need a beta to help with these things, I'm free at the moment, feel free to contact me.

    This story has potential, serious potential, so don't give up on it, keep up the good work and update soon!
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  • From Jaino on April 20, 2009
    Still loving it!
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  • From Extraho on April 20, 2009
    god, draco and fenrir deserves to have harry ignore them! *shudders*
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  • From Shonja on April 20, 2009
    Hi you,
    I absolutely linke your story.
    And I hope that Fenrir and Draco pay for that, was they have done to Harry. (In one way or anather!)
    They realy deserve it!!!!

    But I also have a question.
    Why did you write "For the pack to be strong they needed a unified front and until Harry and Faelan were fully integrated into the pack, the pack would appear weak to other packs and would be more likely to be attacked"

    From that I see Harry never realy was integrated in the pack in the first place, or I'm wrong at that?

    I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

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  • From sanda on April 20, 2009
    good chapter
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  • From brighteyes343 on April 20, 2009
    update soon
    wow

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  • From wolfcathope on April 20, 2009
    Wow i have been looking forward to this and hope the nextt part comes soon. the Alpha and Beta have a lot to answer for, and Harry has a lot to recover from. He has no idea how the were soiety works does he?
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  • From niremalfoy on April 19, 2009
    This is getting really really interesting. Im lookinh forward to reading more! hopefully soon!

    Nire
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