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Reviews for A Mate to Two Werewolves

By : Dreamer27
  • From Jan on April 19, 2009
    Bloody brilliant!!! Loved it!!! I can't wait for chapter 10 to be updated, please update soon^_^

    Jan

    PS: If it's not to much trouble can you email me a notice when you next update?
    naiomi2nailyn@yahoo.com
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  • From LadyArtemis112 on April 19, 2009
    Hi! i LOVE your story! LOVE it! I just have some suggestions that may help improve it overall (I am not bashing your story!). I think you should add more dialogue, more filler, so to speak. For the first five chapters, i was lost as to the background that led Harry to his current position. You already have an AMAZING plot, you just need more filler! Ok again, I love your story! Please update soon!
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  • From Makovaso on April 19, 2009
    good chapter, please update soon
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  • From mls1971 on April 19, 2009
    can't wait to read more of this story!!!!!!!
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  • From lovershatred on April 19, 2009
    yay! you wrote more on the story. i really love this story. it is really sad what the pack did to harry. i hope he gives them hell for what they did to him. yet i hope he starts trusting fenor and draco. i can not what for the next chapter . please write more real soon.
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  • From POOHBEAR74 on April 19, 2009
    I hope they get him and the pup to come together with the rest of the pack.
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  • From laica on April 19, 2009
    wow great chapter really great chapter. please update soon
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  • From dragon04 on April 17, 2009
    PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I LIKE TO SEE WHAT HAPPEN NEXT.
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  • From xalphaxinfidelx on April 15, 2009
    This is an interesting story, and I'm happy to continue reading, but you have serious issues that need to be considered.

    These generally follow:
    Use as little ****** as possible. It overrides the story visually and really shouldn't even be necessary.
    Never have an author's note or POV in your story. Part of developing as a writer is being able to insert the information you're giving without having to have that. Relying on notes and POV statements will cripple your writing.

    Those are the really big things. Like I said, I really am interested in reading this, but your technique needs a little attention.
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  • From alma on April 15, 2009
    Draco and Fenrir are going to have to do alot of begging and kissing ass!
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  • From alma on April 15, 2009
    Didn't care for this chapter much!
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  • From alma on April 15, 2009
    Poor Harry!
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  • From alma on April 15, 2009
    Looks really good!
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  • From TatsuTipatico on April 14, 2009
    I just had to review the story to tell you how addictive it is. I don't usually read many stories with a pairing other than H/D but I can't wait to read more of this, and of Owned Husband too^^ So please, please, please update soon!!
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  • From Darkless on April 14, 2009
    I don't want to seem like I'm being too critical, but this is not a story. What you have here is a rough outline for a story, with some extra information and facts tossed in like an excerpt from an index. None of the ideas are linked together cohesively enough to be considered finished work.

    There are some interesting points and plot ideas. Please take another shot at it, maybe get some help to flesh it out. Don't give up, I'd like to see this fic fly. Good luck.
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