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Reviews for The Hermione Chronicles

By : Moongoddess90
  • From knappshari on December 05, 2009
    Okay, I know that this is PWP, and you sure do have the porn part down pat...lol

    Wow! I liked the energy and thought you put into this piece...it is obvious that you wanted to give Hermione a chance to shed her "good girl" image and...ahem...spread her proverbial wings? *wink*

    Just a suggestion, for next time you may wish to vary your erotic images...i.e. someone taking her up against a wall, in front of mirrors as well as other "dangerous" spots like the Main Hall of Hogwarts where they could get caught. Try to avoid the over use of certain phrases such as "eat pussy" as the redundance makes it lose its lovely shock value.

    Those were only suggestions, given freely so you don't need to follow if you don't wish to. :D

    Otherwise, Kudos for such an interesting and exciting fic.
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  • From on November 04, 2009
    first i would like to think you for chapter 31... i hate story where becouse of who hermione dating she stop being friend with RON.. so think you for makeing them friends again...

    and think you for the letting ron make hermione cum. that would bug him a lot... good story...
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  • From Elphaba on November 04, 2009
    Yay he asked! Loved Molly flipping out!
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  • From Elphaba on November 02, 2009
    Loved the chapter. I can't wait for him to propose
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  • From on November 01, 2009
    very good story... it is OOC but that is the point very hot.. may i ask a for somethink.. ok a few somethink..

    can you have ron in homine become friends again.. they where close for a long time... they need to have sex again if for no other reason that got to suck for on the only time they tried.. ron could not make her cum.. he need to have a redo.. he gotin better...

    ron need a girlfriends... not just his sister... can he get some crazy sex for a chapter please...

    good story very hot
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  • From on October 22, 2009
    NEED MOREEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From streetmouth19 on October 11, 2009
    Two words....LOVED IT!

    Update soon!
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  • From Mmbug98841 on September 25, 2009
    Amazing! Really hot with the four of them at the end. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From on September 23, 2009
    NEEDS MORE Bella AND GINNY SEX!
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  • From Elphaba on September 23, 2009
    Hot!
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  • From FuchsiaScreams on September 21, 2009
    Er.. needs some editing. Run it by a Beta next time so they can correct your grammar. But I like that it's just plain old-fashioned smut with none of the distracting storyline in between.
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  • From on September 21, 2009
    YES SHE should she become a common character!
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  • From Hermyone on September 19, 2009
    Love the story, it's so hot. Some Molly/Ginny/Harry action would be awesome.
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  • From Mmbug98841 on September 18, 2009
    Definitely one of the hotter chapters you've posted in a while. I'm not a huge fan of Molly, but Tonks was hot with Hermione and Sirius. I also can't wait for Bella to reappear.
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  • From Mmbug98841 on September 11, 2009
    Is Bella ever going to make another appearance?
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