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Reviews for Owned Husband

By : Dreamer27
  • From ANON - Enzo on February 07, 2015
    Keep going! This has enormous potential! I love it already! Your personality for both Harry and Draco are spot on! The way you write is also very sophisticated! Please keep writing!

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  • From LadySesshoumaru on March 01, 2011
    r u ever going to continue this...still waiting..love the story
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  • From Smailii1805 on November 22, 2010
    Hello,

    I'm sorry, but your story und especially it's characters are so clishe it's not even funny anymore. The Potters neglecting "poor little Harry" so much is unrealistic to the point where it gets ridiculous. Why would Sirius and Remus not know what's been done to Harry and Rose when it is so fucking obvious? Evan and Rose are nothing more than scenery; they have no unique features and act according to their clishe roles 24/7, which makes them predictable, boring and inhuman.

    Another problem of your story is that you are rushing through the plot instead of taking your time and writing the scenes out. It's better than the story I reviewed last, but your text is still more of a storyline than a real narration. The first chapter was a good start, try to rewrite the rest of the story into something equally detailed.

    Fruehling
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  • From brunehilda on November 02, 2010
    I like this story a lot. I especially like your other stories Abandoned Child and A Mate to Two Werewolves. please please update at least one of your stories. I love all of them. You are a great writer
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  • From Laurithia16 on August 30, 2010
    hello,
    the is interested. I hope it comes a new chapter.
    PS: i like all of your story and my question is, are there by owned husband, child of azkaban a new chapter?
    LG
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  • From goldentrio on August 09, 2010
    Sooo glad to see you updated. I love your stories and this one is probably my favorite.
    Poor Harry, I hope things get better for him and Draco.
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  • From thrnbrooke on August 03, 2010
    Poor Harry!!! Soooo need chapter 7!!!
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  • From mrequecky on July 20, 2010
    Yay, loved! Hope you post more soon!
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  • From SoriaUndead on July 18, 2010
    That's so sad! but i love it ^_^
    i eagerly await the next chapter
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  • From Kayrox133 on July 18, 2010
    What a cool idea. Looks like the Potters are sorry parents and hopefully Draco will let Rose around. So now I wonder if your story will go with Harry in a life of servitude or if he will be able to experience the life he never had.
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  • From NightLo on July 18, 2010
    ...how will Rose react with this news? And would Draco allow Rose to visit Harry?
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  • From thyladyx on July 17, 2010
    well there isnt much to comment on but i look forward to seeing more of this. I hope rose is important later surely she wont just stand by and watch this happen. I hope you start updating this more frequently than you have in the past.
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  • From POOHBEAR74 on July 17, 2010
    hope to see more
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  • From maegerakawaii on July 17, 2010
    AAAWWWW...Poor, Harry. But I'm sure Draco will treat him much better than his supposed family ever did. But the whole loss of freedom thing sucks majorly. I do hope Draco will let Harry have contact with Rose at least. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From capnknuckles on July 17, 2010
    WAHOO! An update!! Glad to see this back.
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