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Reviews for Broken Scales

By : subility
  • From ANON - JordenK on May 02, 2009
    Your summary sounds intriguing and I am very interested in how this story will progress. However, and I have to be honest, I had to stop reading after the first two chapters. Your spelling and grammar mistakes really pulled me out of the story. I tried to overlook them, but there were quite a few. It was especially frustrating with the misspelling of characters' names. (Nevel, Blaize) Again, this is an interesting premise which would really benefit from a beta read through. Apologies if I'm breaking an type of reviewer etiquette. (And for not having an AFF account.)
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  • From margaritama on May 02, 2009
    Oh you naughty tease...that opening was perfect...sigh, only a dream.

    I think she does love Draco and he her. Little Sophia's wakings give them time to spend togeher in the dark and at night. Yummy! :-)
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  • From Robs on May 02, 2009
    for a second there I thought....but no. But if Draco is going to make an effort with her then she ought to do the same, instead of avoiding him because she thinks she is in love with him, LOL. Phew, no Pansy in this chapter. I can imagine she would be fun to write actually. Look forward to the next chapter!
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  • From RenegadeRaine on May 01, 2009
    Nightmare~~Wow...her spelling may be bad in spots, but at least she can read, which is clearly more than you are capable of...the warning clearly stated that this chap hadn't been beta-read yet. Do us all a favor and go un-bunch your panties. It's a good story, with excellent writing, whether there's an occasional spelling mistake or not.
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  • From prayspivey on May 01, 2009
    I love how this story is starting out. Can't wait for the update.
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  • From ANON - dracosgirl on May 01, 2009
    I just found this story this morning. I can't wait for the next chapter! So - keep it up!!
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  • From Robs on May 01, 2009
    LOL, NP for the chapter name XD...Hermione is on a mission now! Draco is going to have to watch his step. They are both playing with fire, and I suspect they will both end up getting burned. Bless little Sophia though...she just keeps them in the real world. My God, is Pansy annoying! I hope Draco finds a way to get rid of her soon! Look forward to the next chapter!
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  • From KMac on May 01, 2009
    Hmmm. Homophones are NOT your friends. I can't count the incorrect words I spotted, but for one it's 'frightened' (=Scared) not 'freighted' (=Shipped as cargo). Your wrong words are spelled right, that much spellcheck does for you, but you've got to be spelling the right words. You need a beta. Badly.
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  • From margaritama on May 01, 2009
    well, he's getting more and more angry isn't he? Q: Pansy walked in on him? she made the house-elf apparate her to his room? that's just wrong...yeah, Hermione needs some suitors.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 29, 2009
    Anxiously awaiting your next update.
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  • From ANON - Quiranna on April 29, 2009
    Keep it up. An interesting idea for a story.
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  • From Robs on April 27, 2009
    Great chapter! Was not expecting that ending, but it was a nice surprise. Typical Draco, changing the colours of the sling. Well, what did Hermione expect; him to walk around with a pink baby sling? She must have forgotten they can do magic!!! And so the game is afoot! I wonder which one of them will be making the next move...
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  • From margaritama on April 27, 2009
    that man is going to implode...yes, Blaise pursuing Hermione would be AMAZING...after all, Draco's with Pansy right??? LOL

    wait, is this post-war??? I can't remember.
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  • From Robs on April 24, 2009
    A good chapter! Draco is changing, that much is obvious. I love the idea of the punishment; this way, they have to get on with each other or they just make the situation worse. Plus, men with babies are so attractive!!! There's no way on earth Hermione can't fall for him now! Look forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - lolabadola` on April 22, 2009
    i loved this it was mmazeing !! YAY! add more!
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