Click Here!

Reviews for Broken Scales

By : subility
  • From ANON - Jess on April 22, 2009
    Well that just took a sudden turn. I like the beginning, how you introduce us to Draco's personal hell and how he has to pretend. I love that Hermione is his fantasy girl. I was a little surprised at how easy it was for Hermione to fantasize about Draco, but I do understand her desire to have the attention of other boys and not be so "claimed". This new project will be interesting. I'm curious to see where you take this. I'll be keeping my eyes out for another update soon. =)
    Report Review

  • From ANON - ELLA on April 18, 2009
    Ok its a great story idea, but your spelling is very bad.
    for starters you need to spell characters' names correctly ... it's spelt Lucius.

    also you need to work on punctuation

    Report Review

  • From K_B_Lynne on April 17, 2009
    OMG! I DID NOT SEE THAT COMING! I LOVE IT! CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE!!!
    Report Review

  • From margaritama on April 17, 2009
    well THAT caught me off guard.
    Report Review

  • From HarryGinny4eva on April 14, 2009
    This is really intriguing so far. I love what you did with that crossover. Wonderful! Thank you. HG4eva
    Report Review

  • From margaritama on April 14, 2009
    Q: I'm assuming this is post-war? thanks.
    Report Review

  • From margaritama on April 14, 2009
    Lovely contrasting chapter...I love how they were dreaming of each other simultaneously.

    PS: love can you separate your graphs for easier reading? txs so much.
    Report Review

  • From RynStar15 on April 11, 2009
    "He was probably thinking about pie." Priceless. I like it so far! Can't wait to see what they do in detention *wriggles eyebrows*. I love the depiction of Pansy, that's exactly how I imagine her, slimy, sqealing and annoying. Couple things I would like to point out though is that it is spelled "Neville" and I don't think Pansy Parkinson knows who Jesus is ;). But I loved the view he got of her panties, how mortifying for her! But how good for the story. Please keep it up!!
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!