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Reviews for A Menagerie

By : fairytopian
  • From Bambisbunny on April 21, 2009
    I kind of like a neville/harry, all the ones that are out there pretty much involve harry raping neville and it would be nice for a at least semi-nice one about them, but then again a threesome would be kinda hot and definitely on the unusual pairings list. I would very much kinda like to see a threesome, maybe start out with harry/neville and add draco but that might be a little harder to write than starting with draco and adding neville. What might be kind of interesting actually would be to have neville/draco and add harry. I support you decision whatever you choose. XD
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  • From PotterWolf on April 18, 2009
    Harry/Neville/Draco
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  • From OHMYRA on April 16, 2009
    Make it Draco/Neville/Harry Cause Harry got raised by Houseelves even if they were strange so he would be the submissive, Neville the Switcher and Draco the Dominant
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  • From kitty08 on April 16, 2009
    on second thought Sev/Harry or Luc/Harry would be great!!
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  • From kitty08 on April 16, 2009
    i like the start of the story. I think a pairing like Draco/Harry or Severus/Harry would be great. I dont know why but I dont really like Neville/Harry pairings. great story so please update soon!!
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  • From RedCerberus on April 16, 2009
    Please write more to this story thanks.

    Harry/Neville/Draco
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  • From 4872luk on April 15, 2009
    Well I am frankly underwhelmed by the sympathy and caring Vernon showed in the first chapter but not surprised. I do love to hate Vernon! This sounds like a really promising story, I can't wait to see where you take it next.

    Re the pairings. Please, please, please don't make it Harry/Nev. I just couldn't stand it. I really like Nev as a character but I just don't think he has a strong enough personality to be a good match with Harry. The only story I have read where Nev has been written with enough oomph to work well with Harry is Nightmares of Futures Past by Viridian and that is a canon pairing story so is sadly lacking in slashy goodness.

    I always think that with the destiny Harry has to cope with he needs a strong and dominant partner who is able to take some of the responsibilities from him. He has to cope with being the Boy Who Lived and have all the associated burdens so needs someone to be able to help him and let him have some time being the one who is looked after and taken care of. With this thought in mind I would like to propose Lucius as the possible mate. Not only is he sex on legs, he also has that whole bad boy thing that I just can't resist. You know there are just not enough Harry/Luc stories in the world. There should be more. If you write one I promise to write you lots of very nice reviews. *Smiles sweetly and offers a plate of freshly baked chocolate brownies* That way you could still have your severitus (sp?) plot thread too! Fantastic plan eh? Ok if you really can't see yourself writing that then how about one of the other slightly more mature characters. Bill or Charlie Weasley are always good and also rarely written. I read a couple of Kingsley pairings not long ago as well they too were quite good. Obviously Luc gets no's 1-100 votes but after that Harry/Luc/Sev, then Harry/Sev then Harry/Bill then Harry/Charlie, or even Harry/Bill/Charlie followed by Harry/Kingsley. About vote no.200 is Harry/Draco, vote no. 10,000 Harry/Nev and then 10,001 onwards is Harry/any female. I know that loads of other people have reviewed with Harry/Draco or Harry/Daco/Nev votes but I wrote more than them! Pretty please choose someone else. I really did just take a tray of chocolate brownies out of the oven *wafts chocolaty goodness smell to try and sway the voting* Remember I voted 100 times for Harry/Luc that's got to count for something right?

    I'd better stop now really hadn't I? I've realised i've gone from quirkily charming to deranged and scary with my demands to a complete stranger. Sorry.
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  • From Arisun on April 15, 2009
    This sounds like a really interesting story and I hope that you continue it. I vote for Draco/Harry with Harry as the uke/sub but Draco/Harry/Neville would be okay too if Harry is still submissive to at least one of them. Also Snape with Lucius or Sirius would be good and Hermione with Blaise.
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  • From knj4k4 on April 15, 2009
    I vote Neville to be in there some how with or without draco. threesomes are fine. I always liked blaze Hermione. but if she's going to be a jerk then no..and luna needs some loven but..i dont have any ideas as to who it would be with if Neville is taken. Maybe someone older..like severus.
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  • From ANON - Trecklar on April 15, 2009
    Harry/Neville. Give Harry 12 inches and make Neville a true "Long Bottom" :P

    Obviously the size would be for when they are older. Draco/Colin Creevey. (Bottom Draco.) Every ferret needs a creepy creevey.

    Seriously Follow your muse and make it what works for you.
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  • From Aalto on April 15, 2009
    A very good and interesting start for a story, congrats!

    I definitely say Harry/Severus or Harry/Lucius for your main pairing, I think Draco is a bit to young, but it isn't an impossible pairing either.

    The second pairing could be Neville/Draco, Neville/Hermione or Neville/Ron. I know I would prefer the first or the last, I'm not very much in to the F/M or Merlins beard for F/F stories...

    Your story flow is very good and you pay nicely attention to details, though I have a feeling the story is progressing a bit to fast, but I can't day for sure just yet. We'll see in later chapters and I'll be sure to tell you if I notice it happening, it makes a good story boring and short.

    But, good writing, nice weather and update soon!
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  • From danawarner on April 15, 2009
    Draco/Harry!!!
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  • From Natwestgirl on April 15, 2009
    again i will vote for neville/harry. Side story can be Ron/Blaise(Blk M)
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  • From sanda on April 15, 2009
    Harry/Neville/Draco with Harry as the sub more often than not
    Hermione/Daphne
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  • From bill560682 on April 15, 2009
    i still vote harry/creevey brothers. draco you can stick with ron since the only difference in the is money. also you can stick harry with the patil twins. parkinson and millisent. an granger gets no one since she is such a prude who should die first year and ginny dies second year. also crabbe and goyle should be really smart but playing really dumb to prevent ending up as future deatheaters, they can not really be as dumb as they act or they would still be first years when everyone else their age are 7th years. an snape is to much of an ass to end up with anyone at all.
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