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Reviews for Abandoned Child

By : Dreamer27
  • From ANON - Mordred on January 27, 2017

    Why do you have this symbol� instead of an apostrophe? Its makes your story harder to read then putting the correct punctuation mark.


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  • From ANON - taya on September 03, 2015
    I'm confused if Harry/Lucas finished number 1 in his grade then why does he need lessons to catch up with the others. He would be ahead of them wouldn't he? Also when did Rosier and Lucas meet? If he's as alone as you describe he'd be clinging to that relationship before the party and not even know who Rosier is at the party. I read it because it seems to have a lot of potential but I'm really confused. Also while I can understand Dumbledore not knowing about the lightning bolt scar oh Lucas' shoulder how does Lily not notice unless she's the most unobservant mother ever.
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  • From Calmzone1 on July 29, 2014
    poor Harry. Hope you finish it one day
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  • From ANON - cherokee on June 18, 2014
    please make the next chapter
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  • From ANON - jl on March 05, 2014
    Please finish this!!!Its awesome!!!
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  • From ANON - Allie Boucher on October 10, 2013
    If you ever update please email me. I love your stories!!
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  • From Mashkai30 on August 26, 2013
    Lovely story! I like it thus far and am looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing!
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  • From jami_lee on June 13, 2013
    Love, Love , love this story!!!! Can't wait to read more!! I hope that you finish it one day!!!
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  • From ANON - j on April 24, 2013
    I like the story in general, it has promise. However, you are a terrible writer.
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  • From Mashkai30 on August 24, 2012
    I am really enjoying this thus far. Thanks for sharing!
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  • From jamescun on January 26, 2012
    plz write more
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  • From MissiYoung on August 05, 2010
    I'd like to see more of this story. It's a good storyline and I'm interested to see where it goes.
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  • From mistressdragon89 on July 26, 2010
    I have just read abandoned child and am loving it I was wondering if you have written any more to the story because I would love to read it.
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  • From HeartStar on July 18, 2010
    I was wondeing if you were still working on this...
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  • From Elvira on May 10, 2010
    Nice.

    Iwonder how they will all react now?

    update soon!
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