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Reviews for Hopes and Wishes

By : 4872luk
  • From Selera on April 18, 2009
    What they most hold dear is their normalcy and that is very hard to take away, but meh.. I'd almost be tempted to leave them where they are now.

    I love your story and look forward to more.
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  • From JudyBisbee on April 18, 2009
    Great so far. I like the teddy bear aspect you could have Harry talk to teddy and as much to the grownups.
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  • From serenagold on April 18, 2009
    I's so glad that the Teddy managed to make its way with them all to Hogwarts. ^^
    I was actually afraid they'd leave it behind. o_o


    Keep up the good work!
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  • From knj4k4 on April 18, 2009
    wonderful just great!!
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  • From ladyedgecombe on April 18, 2009
    I loved the He Had Teddy chapter. Someone needs to show him about magic and fix teddy and change his eyes to green to match Harry's. It just seems to be the thing to do. Oh well. Maybe he likes teddy the way he is. Can't wait to read the reactions when they eventually find out he thinks his name is boy. I just love Severus outrage at Harry's plight. He is so good at getting retribution.
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  • From Selera on April 17, 2009
    ONly recently started to read this and I am enjoying it alot.
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  • From ladyedgecombe on April 17, 2009
    I think it is a good start. I would love to see where you are going with it. I too read alot of fanfic but I have yet to bite the bullet and get inspired to write one, although I do have one in mind. Maybe you can inspire me to actually put it to paper (or screen as the case may be). Good Luck and please update soon.
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  • From fadingstar on April 17, 2009
    I actually liked the way that you wrote the scenes with the Dursleys. The lack of description made it feel.. surreal and alien-ish.. xD not sure if I'm conveying the impressing I got correctly but yeah.. The poem at the beginning was also a nice touch, sweet and simple. Poor Harry :( makes you just wanna give him a hug ;[ The Remus/Sev interaction is amusing though :D
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  • From JudyBisbee on April 17, 2009
    So far good . Where are you going with this fic
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  • From WasteOfSpace on April 17, 2009
    This is really interesting so far. I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work.
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  • From serenagold on April 17, 2009
    Your writing style is a little strange, but I really enjoyed the fragmented underdeveloped and desperate thought processes of a young "Boy" Harry. It was touching and really good.

    The Severus and Remus pairing was kinda odd though. Its not that you can't put them together (far from it! Its an odd and random pairing, hardly ever done. Actually I was kinda to surprised to see it, especially after reading "The Other Side of the Mirror" which just recently was completed. - I highly recommend it.) Its just that the pairing shows up with no explanation. You need to go into it more. Having Remus show up with Severus to sneak a peak at Harry comes off extremely random, since they generally hate each other in the books.

    Other than that, overall good job. ^^ Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Bones on April 16, 2009
    Wow. That was very good. Very well written. I can't wait to read more of it. Keep up the good work.
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