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Reviews for When Malfoy wants a Witch

By : PrincessHildaWerewolf
  • From linmo on May 01, 2009
    So he is going to put a spell on Hermione to make her tested pregnant? But what if she refuse to have sex with him even after wedding? He needs to woo his witch harder!

    I had huge fun reading this chapter. Thank you.
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  • From on May 01, 2009
    How's Draco going to prove that she is having his baby in court?!?!?!? Can't wait till the next chapter please post it soon!! I'm moving in a week and I just have to know asap!!!!! And I'd take a bad Draco anytime!!! He say he got me knocked up anytime and I would demand that he did!
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  • From ANON - Panther Eyes on May 01, 2009
    i don't know why but i have feeling that this court case is going to get ugly. for who im not really sure. so the whole falling for a woman-who-would-rather-cut-off-your-balls thing runs in the malfoy family... that explains a lot *lol*. i must say out of all the hermione/draco fanfiction i read... your draco is biggest lovesick idiot i ever see.
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  • From HighViscosity on May 01, 2009
    This story is so silly that it's quite endearing.
    And as far as the "little menace," all I can say is

    Awwwwwwwww! (-:
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  • From dragongirl on April 28, 2009
    Love this story is funny and light ... Please more more more *as soon as you can of course*.. LOL
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  • From ANON - lemonade on April 27, 2009
    Ii think that a manipulative, obsessed, scheming Draco is a good one. Also, a Hermione in turmoil and being pursued the wrong way is also good, but may I give you some unsolicited advice? I think your story could be even better with 'show it, don't tell it.' Instead of having Draco recite that Harry and Draco are gay, show it. Have them walk in holding hands, or kiss, or show with their dialogue what their relationship/preferences are. Also, scenes with Hermone pining over Severus and spending time with him would have been wonderful to see. Watching their established relationship and being able to look back to see the signs of Severus' disinterest would have really been fun.

    I could have used a few more instances of you showing Draco's courting efforts and planning his strategy before he moved on to his last desperate ploy, as well. It could help me become more drawn into Hermione's/Draco's plight and would have made the scene in the wizengamot more tense.

    One last thing... I don't think that any of those people would just accept by word of mouth that Hermione is pregnant, especially when she is protesting any relationship, no one has seen her date Draco and no physical proof is offered. If a confundus charm is being used, imperius, or something put on Hermione to give the illusion that she is expecting I could believe that she would be forced to comply with an archaic, unfair law more than people just blaming hormones for her anger.

    And although this is full of concrit, also know that I rarely take the time to do this for anyone. It's definitely not picking on you.
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  • From Citten on April 27, 2009
    Bad Draco! :) sorry i just had to! :) (well he just like his name sake isnt he?) well you are half for given only if you are a good--no scrach that great writer you will try and work on (if only in your head) the next chapter or chapters you when you can do us the great honor of reading the next chapter we can expect more and soon too!!! :) Love ya babe and i do hope that you can get everything straighten out soon. :) love your story--i mean it!!!!
    ps how do you like collies? i was just always courious about how they would be! :) hope to hear from you in a week (or sooner if you can swing it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)
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  • From linmo on April 27, 2009
    it is totally ridiculous yet highly entertianing. I really enjoy it. Please do continue.
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  • From ANON - Panther Eyes on April 26, 2009
    no problem. puppy draco is probably like draco malfoy... always seeking attention. good luck in getting back to the story.
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  • From ANON - nonentity on April 26, 2009
    Ha! Draco's are badly behaved, whether wizard or dog. (Not to be unsympathetic about the damage.)
    I like Severus's dry comments about roses sending her into shock etc. I also like the path Severus chooses--very Slytherin-y and moral-y questionable. I'll be curious to see Remus's reactions to the situations. The assorted characters are a bit cartoon-y, but in an entertaining way. I like the plotline so far.
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  • From Coipje on April 26, 2009
    Lovely chapter but I don't like the love sick puppy Hermione
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  • From mlui on April 25, 2009
    2: Fantastic chapter! At least someone believes her, except Severus is going to use her to his advantage (how Slytherin!). I'm sure Harry and Ron woud believe her though...wouldn't they? Severus and Remus? Hmm, I didn't see that one coming, or Hermione being gravely allergic to roses. Who wears roses on themselves?? Only Narcissa... I can't wait for the next chapter!! =)
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  • From Citten on April 25, 2009
    Well that was a wonderful chapter!!! well draco is really playing it up isnt he? poor narcissa she didnt know, well she is very excited, isnt she? :) well who wouldnt want hermione for their son she is wonderful! i wondered about severus preferences though i do like it best for this stroy! :) i cant wait to see what is going to happen tonight! i wonder what will draco do =)? i will understand not being able to update all the time i just request that you not abondon the stroy!!! i also LOVE long stories so i have a feeling that i am going to love this one!!!! :) i do hope that you post as soon as you can! :)
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  • From scarletwitchextreme on April 24, 2009
    draco could play stalker material so well, is it me oh do u want to laugh at the senario or strangle draco to death. I mean couldnt they do a pregnancy spell or truth serum and where is harry and ron to help her get her away from those crazy malfoys all 3 of them. Severus the sneaky snake he is going to sell his friend of so he get his wolf, when all the amazing writing is done and u get through the madness u have to agree with me that this senario could be easily avoided if she gets some sane ppl around her...lol u have my head spinning so bad i want to scream, and i was so happy u upadted so quickly. Shakes head* i want hermione to get her revenge, and draco needs some mental help, the boy is drop away from the loony bin...lol god i am still laughing although I am angry...lol u have me so flustered. Keep me on my toes, bye

    Respect
    Scarlet
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  • From margaritama on April 24, 2009
    FAVE LINES:
    "But she'd rather like Severus' tongue in her mouth. Or better yet, on her girlie bits." AND the "He was well-endowed."

    Oh god, the snappy, quick-paced and silly and funny dialogue has me in tears...of laughter. And Sev being gay and Hermione not having a clue...goodness, this is like a modern, dirty Oscar Wilde play.

    Can't wait to see what Draco will do to win his witch.
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