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Reviews for When Malfoy wants a Witch

By : PrincessHildaWerewolf
  • From nmos on May 04, 2009
    hmmm. reading this made me really frustrated for Hermoine. all of her friends are stabbing her in the back and it's kind of terrible. not your writing or anything, but like Harry and Ron don't stick up for her. and Severus claims to be her friend but it willing to sell her off to Malfoy so that he can get Remus. I don't know...i think that at some point it should definitely be proved that Hermione isn't pregnant. she's really smart, so she'd probably figure out if he had a way of making it seem like she were pregnant. also, she better not turn into narcissa or the other malfoy women. becuase that would also be terrible. at this point i don't want Malfoy and Hermione to get together because of how everything has been set up. even if they do have "passion" it should still be her choice. right now, it kind of seems like boarder-line rape if they are forced to get married, and malfoy changed her while she was passed out.
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  • From ANON - Panther Eyes on May 04, 2009
    remus n severus... a cute pairing. how hermione never saw the attraction i'll never know. but she was never that smart in the relationship department (no offense hermione). now on to the more important questions... how could ron n harry betray hermione like that? in the 1st chapter they saw malfoy getting rejected n threatening to get back at hermione. doesn't malfoy know that hermione will hate him more for this? if it were me i cut off his pecker turn him into a ferret n have him get eaten alive by buckbeak. if you considered that to be harsh believe me when i say i can think up of something worst but i'll safe those for later.
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  • From on May 04, 2009
    I'm moving to North Carolina!!! :( Great chapter damn that Malfoy charm!!! He had me convinced that she was having his baby!!! Lucky Hermione!!!! Can I be in her shoes just for a day??? I'd make him forget her lol!
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  • From margaritama on May 04, 2009
    Okay, never mind Oscar Wilde...its more Joe Orton...LOL....Hermione is just getting batted about like a birdie. And Draco is quite the actor.
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  • From mlui on May 04, 2009
    4: I guess Severus gave Draco to mimick pregnancy? Although I think Hermione's violence in the courtroom is a little OOC. She a sensible person and uses logic to her advantage. Shouldn't she have been prepared? And acting violent would just allow them to use the excuse of her being pregnant *shakes head*. Er, Harry and Ron?? Petting hairs? You'd think they would've grown up and stop acting so childishly... Great chapter and I can't wait for the next chapter! =)
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  • From ochitduzon on May 04, 2009
    This is really hilarious! LOve the funny dialouges! Draco is soooo charming doing every nasty thing just to get Hermione! How did he manage to make Hermione pregnant? I am sooo looking forward to the time when it will be Hermione who will do the chasing. I want it the other way around this time probably in the end of this fiction?
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  • From HighViscosity on May 04, 2009
    This feels like a quadrangle of doom! Well, it would it Remus liked Draco... lol, I'm glad that he doesn't.
    I feel bad for Hermione, but... not THAT bad, because she probably should have given Draco a chance BEFORE he became obsessed.



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  • From ANON - luna love on May 04, 2009
    I personally think Draco deserves a bit of name-smearing. Or a lot. ^^

    Does he have any idea what he is getting himself into?
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  • From ANON - thedarkwitch on May 03, 2009
    Please update. I love it, please pretty please update.
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  • From Coipje on May 02, 2009
    It doesn't matter It is still a cool story please continue :D
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  • From Citten on May 02, 2009
    HE'S A FERRETT!!! HAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHA that so suits him! :) well i do hope that you don't leave us in supense for too long i am dying to know what is going to happen! :) but you just know it is enevalbe that she is going to end up with him espically after all it seems that all his family has had to do it this way! so do update and soon!!!!!
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  • From ANON - luna love on May 02, 2009
    Well, Draco does "pain in the butt" rather spectacularly! ^^
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  • From mlui on May 02, 2009
    I hope Hermione somehow wins, as in it's proven that she's not pregnant. (But maybe they could still get engaged?) It's just that it would be terrible for Hermione and women in general to be humiliated like that, especially if everyone thinks she's a whore, etc. That way her reputation and career is somewhat still salvageable.

    I really laughed when his Animagus is a ferret! Lock him up indeed, that was funny. I can just feel Hermione's frustration...I can't wait for the next chapter! =)
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  • From scarletwitchextreme on May 01, 2009
    i am glad u got chap3 up and geez i cant wait for the hearing and i stick to my point all 3 malfoy's are delusional, i cant wait for hermione to kick his ass severely. keep up the good work and i actually feel sorry for hermione as she is clueless about snape....cant wait for that to blow up in her face...lol

    Respect
    Scarlet
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  • From margaritama on May 01, 2009
    "You aren't going to be a love slave," Draco whispered, brushing his lips against her ear, "except on special occasions. You will be my wife."

    That line had me LMAO! HILARIOUS. Okay, so I don't think Hermione should have spit on Draco...that was lowering herself. I don't think I ever wish to see do such a thing again. Naughty Hermione, next time Draco might spank her.

    So, it's so funny how she talks and talks and talks but no one listens. It's like she's in a soundproof room and everyone talks around her. I do hope she eventually falls for the ferret...LOL. Thank you for the new chappie.
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