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Reviews for When Malfoy wants a Witch

By : PrincessHildaWerewolf
  • From ANON - dian on August 09, 2015
    Funny
    I love this non-slytheryn sex god thingy....
    He is also cunning ... Love love love
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  • From ANON - Bekkah J on February 27, 2011
    I have one question - how could you possibly make Hermione into such a pathetic, insipid, weak, whining girl?? Yes, she would fight Draco and yes, she would hate to leave the wizarding world if she refused the contract but there is NO WAY she would just yell and lash out all the time. I ended up reading about half your fic becasue I figured you might have simply made her 2-dimensional at the beginning because of her shock but she remained that way till Chapter 12 (and possibly further but I refuse to read more). The only time she was remotely similar to her original character traits was when she was negotiating 'favours' with Lucius. Oh - actually I do have one other question...when, in all of this, does Hermione get her period so she realises she's not pregnant?? Or IS she pregnant - if this is the case then Draco is doing more lying which should cause her to come to her senses.

    Please don't feel as though I am attacking you here - I just became more and more angry as I kept reading. It is important to develop a character a you write - and to remember that a strong-willed woman does not simply shout and hit people. I don't know how this story finishes (and I won't since I'm not reading anymore) but I truely hope that Hermione comes to her senses, realises she doesn't need any of them, researches the crap out of the marriage contract and gets her way out of it...or disappears.

    I do like Lucius as a character in your story, however. Not as evil as he is in other fics, but there's no problem there as you state plainly that he sees Hermione as a boost for the family. His scheming and anger are justified and mostly well-written.

    This story was written a while ago so I'm not expecting a reply. I simply had to get all this off my chest - developing character from the very first chapter is the most important part of a narrative text. If the characters don't develop it doesn't matter how great the rest is.
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  • From Glorioux on October 14, 2010
    Yup...must love naughty draco's, braided Lucius, love sick evil doer Jr.. Too precious...just what I needed during a bad day.

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  • From ANON - cherry on May 06, 2010
    please update next of the chapter i really love it thanks
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  • From tanyaflorio on March 28, 2010
    PLEASE PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - wickedwitch on January 04, 2010
    COULD you update sooon cos i cant help to wander whats next
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  • From ANON - wickedwitch on December 19, 2009
    please,im begging utoupdate maany chapters more ur story is the best...interesting andfun

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  • From Padfootsgrl on December 16, 2009
    good chapter. but man remus is so femmy. but hey it's your story, i'm just a loyal reader. lol
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  • From ANON - Panther Eyes on December 16, 2009
    AWWW.... SEVERUS AND REMUS ARE DADDIES!!! thank you for bringing humor back to the story. so... how long is hermione going to make draco wait?
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  • From dragongirl on December 16, 2009
    They deserve a happy ending .. He is so cute!
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  • From ANON - wickedwitch on December 14, 2009
    ahmn ,your fan fiction is so bloooody interesting....unlike the other stories that i read , could you please update soooner .....cause im always thingking your nextchapters very much now and often..... please let hermioneforgive him and leave a happy life, don't let it bea pure joke ....i mean i don''twanthermione to suffer a disapointment that what draco was showingwas apure displayout of love..please im begging you to update soon.
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  • From dragongirl on December 12, 2009
    Oh my God my poor Drakie pooh! Sorry that was a Pansy moment and is unforgivable.. LOL My darling sweetheart, OK we need more of this is funny and sweet but my Draco need to toughing up a little not too much so he can kick Blaise behind.. LOL
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  • From ANON - Panther Eyes on December 12, 2009
    i was right that the wedding wouldn't happen. atleast hermione still loves draco after knowing what a big jerk he was. blaise was a much bigger jerk... no wait... a bastard then i expected. good news everybody know where hermione was. but the bad news is we don't know what is wrong with her this time. will hermione be alright? will the drama ever end? will she and draco have a happily ever after? and will ron ever learn when to keep his mouth shut? wait... this is ron i'm talking about so no.
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  • From ANON - cerrie on November 20, 2009
    please please write or update sooooooooooon....
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  • From ANON - moonlit shadows on October 30, 2009
    I'm a big fan of this story and I can't wait to know what happens next
    at first I thought that the character of Draco was a little too childish
    But I guess he's just passionate and perhaps a little spoilt
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