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Reviews for The Children of Atum

By : ajgordon
  • From ladyedgecombe on May 01, 2009
    I am suppost to be working not reading naughty stories but thats how it goes sometimes. Love the whole curse made Harry this way bit and am glad you didn't delved too deep into sex with a child bit. Harry needs to be loved and not abused. Wonder what Snape will say when he finds out? and does Albus have nefarious reasons for this particular spell? Was he hoping for a little action on the side or did the spell backfire on him and he really wanted a true warrior? Seems as if Harry went to the more fem side of things. I look forward to more of the story and if my opinion counts for anything, I love the Snarry bit.
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  • From ErisDynamite on May 01, 2009
    Walburga is the name lised on HP lexicon as Sirius' mother.

    good chapter ^_^
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  • From knj4k4 on May 01, 2009
    According to Canon yes she is Sirius mum..I like it. very hot.
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  • From knj4k4 on May 01, 2009
    I have a serious hunger for rimming and fisting, but I cannot stand noncon. you asked...thank you for answering my question about Snape and the other kiddys.
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  • From wolfcathope on April 30, 2009
    Wow I woul love for you to keep going and I know you didn't answer my questions before so here they are again. Will Harry have a mate, what about an animagus form? Will he go th Hogwarts? Please keep going thank you
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  • From knj4k4 on April 30, 2009
    Severus is a teacher...I love chan but is it going to be only Harry? or does he have others at school?
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  • From DysyniaandDisolo on April 26, 2009
    Hey, if this is a threesome/moresome story, it needs to be in the correct category. We're not trying to nitpick, we just don't want to see your story removed by the admins.
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  • From ladyedgecombe on April 24, 2009
    It is a good start. I look forward to reading more. you should google snake magic or sex if you are going that far with it. i have often wondered why these type of stories don't use it more. harry is a parslemouth after all and can talk to the snake. i am assuming that the idea is not to tramatize harry but to use sex magic and walburga was talking about to increase his magic? i look forward to the next update.
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  • From rougeshadows23456 on April 24, 2009
    The story is good so far. Keep updating! I hope Dumbledore dies a painfully death.
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  • From knj4k4 on April 24, 2009
    excited about more..but please no rape...:'(
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  • From on April 24, 2009
    i love it
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  • From wolfcathope on April 24, 2009
    I like so far but will Harry have a mate? an animagus form? and what House?
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  • From JudyBisbee on April 24, 2009
    good so far happy writing..
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  • From danawarner on April 24, 2009
    Yay! Arabella is on Harry's side!
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  • From sanda on April 24, 2009
    good chapter
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