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Reviews for Running Away

By : BasiliskSerpent
  • From ANON - sweettee on January 15, 2010
    please up date soon, liked the first 3 chapter's so far
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  • From UgliestRose on May 11, 2009
    I be surprised there aren't more EdwardxHarry lovin' on this site.
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  • From vaire on May 09, 2009
    I really like how you've begun this story despite some spelling mistakes. However I think you should move it into the crossover category (it will also help you get more readers as thats where people looking for this type of stroy go). Good work.
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  • From Tesgura on May 07, 2009
    Awesome chapter, not sure on the actual relationship between Harry and Ron though. And what was Author's business with DUmbledore? It didn't have anything to do with Harry not living with the Dursleys anymore, right?
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  • From Juana13 on May 06, 2009
    looks good so far. cant wait for more though
    hope the next chapter contains harry meeting edward... *hint*
    : )
    looking forward to it already!
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  • From Jan on May 06, 2009
    Great start! I can't wait for chapter 4, hope it's soon ^_^

    Jan
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  • From alma on May 05, 2009
    Looking good!
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  • From alma on May 05, 2009
    Good start!
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  • From crazy4sex41582 on May 03, 2009
    yeah harry left the Dursleys. Great story
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  • From Tesgura on May 03, 2009
    Read the second chapter now, great, can't wait for more!
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  • From Tesgura on May 03, 2009
    Great story, only read the first chapter so far but I had to say just how cool this story is so far. By the way, a female head of family is a matriarch, not patriarch, as a note.
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  • From Jeanette17 on May 02, 2009
    Oh, and the matriarch/patriarch thing, which Aella has already pointed out... =]
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  • From crazy4sex41582 on May 02, 2009
    hope you update soon love harry/twilight.
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  • From Jeanette17 on May 02, 2009
    Okay, so...I think I'm probably going to like this story a lot. As long as you stick with it, of course (which I know can be hard to do, but I have high hopes as of right now). I can never get enough of these crossovers. =] As far as criticism goes, I would say that you could use a beta, to help with some small errors (i.e. some spelling mistakes which probably happened because you were typing the chapter in a hurry and...well, Russia's not a continent = ) Also, I would use 'thoughts' and *parseltongue*. Or maybe [parseltongue]. I just think that the asterisks are a little distracting for things as common in your story as Harry's thoughts. Otherwise, keep it up sweetie! I can't wait for your first update. Adieu.
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  • From artemyl on May 02, 2009
    Well, it's too early for me to really say whether I really like it or not, but it is a pretty good start. Also, as a side note, it's matriarch not patriarch.
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