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By : Shpamm123
  • From Robs on May 16, 2009
    Good chapter! Maybe Hermione will be getting some advice from Ginny in the future? Draco has to do something soon...twice in one day is too much of a coincidence for him not to realise. I wonder how they might come together...

    Look forward to the next chapter!
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  • From margaritama on May 16, 2009
    thank you darling...appreciate the spacing. funny little chapter...him smelling her has thrown me for a loop. I'm wondering if it means anything....hmmm.
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  • From margaritama on May 10, 2009
    I like how canon Draco is...going to keep an eye out to see where it's going.

    PS: one tiny request? can you space out your paragraphs for easier reading? txs a million! :-)
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  • From Robs on May 09, 2009
    Another good chapter. The way you have them meeting sets a good platform for what is to come. I also like the way you have written Pansy. Personally I find her character really annoying to write! Look forward to the next chapter!
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  • From bananasforyou on May 04, 2009
    awesome!
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  • From Ilovegreen on May 04, 2009
    I like this fic so far. As you said it is a little short and there are some grammer error here and there. But My first chapter wasn't that great either. I love Draco/Hermione fic so can't wait to see where this goes. Good luck and can't wait to see more.
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  • From Robs on May 04, 2009
    You have a nice writing style that's nice to read. It'd be good to see where you take this, although I hope not all of your chapters are that short!
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